Untitled (Abcedarian 1st attempt)

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Open Poetry #28

Untitled (Abcedarian 1st attempt)

Amature2
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since 2001-01-08

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0 posted 2003-09-09 10:22 PM

Another Bountiful Crimson Day
Emerged From Glittering Horizon
Incomplete Jagged Kaleidoscope's Lonely Moon
Nights Overture Pendulum Quietly Rocks
Soothing Tranquility’s Unhindered Vision
With X-ray Yielding Zodiacs

"Due to budget cuts, the light at the end of the tunnel, has been turned off" author unknown

[This message has been edited by Amature2 (09-10-2003 12:12 AM).]

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

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1 posted 2003-09-10 01:48 AM

very good 1st try,, I enjoyed reading,,

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

2 posted 2003-09-10 02:22 AM

Excellent attempt at an Abcedarian poem. You are the first person other than myself whom I have met that knew the meaning of the word. Bravo! Keep up the effort. I would love seeing what you come up with next. Thank-you for sharing this.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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3 posted 2003-09-10 04:44 PM

Oh, I am simply smiling out loud~
I've done this, but didn't realize it had an actual really-truly name~

I'll have to dig through the pots on the back burner and see if I can find mine~

Thank you .. this is GREAT !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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