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Open Poetry #28

Those Feel Good Whispers

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2003-09-10 05:14 AM

Those Feel Good Whispers

Its the strangest feeling
Being emotionally drained
I still continue yearning
My heart longingly remained

My emotional outpouring
In having written how I feel
Will longing ever cease
One wonders if time will heal

Feeling you deep within
This was all my own making
Yearning is not only painful
Its emotionally heartbreaking

Musing of moments past
Hoping the glow will renew
The days pass by slowly
Heart aching, longing for you

Those feel good whispers
Had once showed concern
Was it worth me longing
Would your love ever return

Hope©2003

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-09-10 05:57 AM

expressed well,, enjoyied the read

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2003-09-10 06:10 AM

Hope...though beautifully expressed, I could
feel the ache and longing in this piece.
Nicely written, my friend.
Hugs,
~Vicky
If you judge people, you have no time to love them.
--Mother Teresa

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2003-09-10 03:18 PM

Feeling you deep within
This was all my own making
Yearning is not only painful
Its emotionally heartbreaking

Loved this, and your title is perfect!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2003-09-10 09:46 PM

Hope~

I feel this...

Susan

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2003-09-10 09:51 PM

Such poise in the emotion brought forth...
these questions so valid...and the answers so elusive at times.
Hugs, TD

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

6 posted 2003-09-10 10:26 PM

I feel your sense of longing and hope in this.

Crystal

Lotus Breeze
Member

since 2003-09-06

Posts 112

7 posted 2003-09-10 10:30 PM

I miss whispers
Times when just waking I think I hear them, nice poem

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