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smalls
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since 2002-12-20
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0 posted 2003-09-10 03:11 AM


Sheltered moons light
In a night sky
That no one has seen
Because whose red pencil did what
Write for himself
His own imagination
That was as dark as night to them
Sheltered by earth’s dust
A light that was always there
Always left on for him.

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vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
1 posted 2003-09-10 03:13 AM



And a beautiful Passage it is.
Enjoyed this, smalls.
Hugs,
~Vicky

If you judge people, you have no time to love them.
--Mother Teresa

Nan
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since 1999-05-20
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2 posted 2003-09-10 07:20 AM


Light transcends through dusty darkness - indeed...
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
3 posted 2003-09-10 09:11 AM


smalls:

beautiful indeed . . .
she smiles upon me, she knows
(this reminded me of Harold and the Purple Crayon, intensified one million times
you must read it)
xxoo

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