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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-09-09 10:07 PM



There it was in the pages of blue
a friendly face unseen
a flicker of candlelight
to finish my day
and guide me towards
a caring tomorrow~~


thank you,
M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2003-09-09 10:35 PM


Maureen - may your day tommorrow be filled with thoughts of caring. My best to you always...

BC

QjQ
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2 posted 2003-09-09 11:26 PM


very nice thoughts to share,,,,

                

angelblueyes
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3 posted 2003-09-09 11:29 PM


Very nice thoughts.May your days to come have many caring moments wether seen or unseen.
Crystal

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2003-09-10 02:09 AM


I'm glad someone made you smile...
it's a good one Maur~  (your smile)  

HopeS
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5 posted 2003-09-10 05:18 AM


most beautifully expressed Maureen
yes here is
hoping the end of sorrows ,to more and more smiling caring tomorrows

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6 posted 2003-09-10 06:39 AM


Sometimes I think that may be the best thing these pages do for us. Other times, I'm certain of it.

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2003-09-10 09:10 AM


I have seen your face and shared a meal...
you are as true as you are to your words.
thanks Bill

Thank you Glenn, I am pleased when I see you have visited my words.

Crystal, sometimes when you least expect it
a smile comes your way  

Lori, I won't be around to catch you today...maybe tonight, if not... tomorrow
"it's a good one Maur~  (your smile)" that's what I said..my smile is my best feature  
Have a wonderful day ( and you have a great one, too)hugss

  
HopeS, thank you...I know we share many of the same feelings even if I don't always express them to you often. Your words say much of how I feel.

Ed, so true...here I was just checking in and I was handled a "word smile" wrapped in blue. I always wondered what it felt like that saying "when one door closes"...

It's nice to have friends who care...thank you

Maureen


  

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (09-10-2003 09:11 AM).]

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