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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2003-09-08 10:29 AM



Be As the Wind

Be as the wind, and flutter through the leaves
For nothing fills the soul as do the trees
With murmuring and rustling of a dream
That swirls through shady parasols of green

Be as the oak in times of joy or grief
As seasons come and go, so does the leaf
Its hues of glory turn and spin around
And fall to sudden silence on the ground

Then be as barren branches in the cold
And make of winter, beauty to behold
Just as an elm in January’s wind
That gathers icy white on twig and limb

Be as the whispers in the April rain
For teardrops are the nourishment to pain
Then as the apple blossoms of the spring
Unfold your vibrant heart to dance and sing

Be as the warmth and coldness of the breeze
Be as the changing seasons of the trees

Elizabeth Santos
September 7, 2003

© Copyright 2003 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2003-09-08 10:32 AM


Liz

Tree's are wonderful...so are you.  Loved this!  

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2 posted 2003-09-08 10:42 AM


"Be as the whispers in the April rain
For teardrops are the nourishment to pain
Then as the apple blossoms of the spring
Unfold your vibrant heart to dance and sing

Be as the warmth and coldness of the breeze
Be as the changing seasons of the trees"

Beautiful Liz...absolutely breathtaking!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

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   I still have sand in my shoes ~

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3 posted 2003-09-08 10:44 AM



I am very, very sure
you meant for the tickle
of hairs in rise
to be the feel of the wind
in the read alone.

Beautiful, Lady Santos...
absolutely breathtaking...

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-09-08 10:56 AM


Elizabeth, this is truly lovely. I love trees, the wind, and this poem.


Linda

Denise
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5 posted 2003-09-08 11:07 AM


Very lovely, Elizabeth!

Great picture too! Look at all those kiddies!

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6 posted 2003-09-08 11:19 AM


Elizabeth,
Be as the whispers in the April rain
For teardrops are the nourishment to pain
Then as the apple blossoms of the spring
Unfold your vibrant heart to dance and sing
Lovely write.

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7 posted 2003-09-08 04:21 PM


I needed this today, dear lady.... and I thank you for it. *S* So very beautiful!
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8 posted 2003-09-08 09:03 PM


Liz, like all your poems, this too is sensational. You have such a feel and love of nature and it comes roaring through in your words.

For nothing fills the soul as do the trees

How very, very true!

Hugs dear lady, Marti

Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you.

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9 posted 2003-09-09 12:05 PM


Liz...Enjoyed very much. The trees,people and different seasons a perfect blend. Thanks for sharing...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

Kaoru
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10 posted 2003-09-09 12:36 PM


Beautiful!
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11 posted 2003-09-09 03:10 AM


lovely penning,, lady poetess

           

Nan
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12 posted 2003-09-09 07:34 AM


ELIZABETH SANTOS!!!  You've outdone yourself..AGAIN!!!

I absolutely love this... I love it... I love it...

Janet Marie
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13 posted 2003-09-09 08:18 AM


Be as the wind, and flutter through the leaves
For nothing fills the soul as do the trees
With murmuring and rustling of a dream
That swirls through shady parasols of green

Be as the oak in times of joy or grief
As seasons come and go, so does the leaf
Its hues of glory turn and spin around
And fall to sudden silence on the ground

Then be as barren branches in the cold
And make of winter, beauty to behold
Just as an elm in January’s wind
That gathers icy white on twig and limb

==========================

Well this is just flat out stunning...
one I am tree green with poetic envy that I didnt write..but then how could I...for as I read what came to mind was this is Liz Santos.."be the poet"
This lovely write goes in my tree hugging library.

When was the last time you felt this high,
you are the best I've ever felt.
Its so wrong not to be with you
Its getting harder to stay away.

SH

Elizabeth Santos
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14 posted 2003-09-09 09:03 AM


I am humbled and flattered by the comments of such remarkable poets, and you have all lifted me into the breeze this morning with your very kind remarks.
Thank you dear freinds
Poetic hugs
Liz

Marge Tindal
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15 posted 2003-09-09 12:03 PM


LovelyLizzyLady~
Just so beautiful is this~

'parasols of green'

You blow gently though this poetic mind, my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Denise
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16 posted 2003-09-10 09:00 AM


Hugs to you too, Elizabeth!
littlewing
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17 posted 2003-09-10 09:15 AM


Elizabeth . . .
ahh the only way to be , as the seasons . . .
ever-changing
beautiful!
xxoo

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