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scuffedshoe2
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0 posted 2003-09-10 12:22 PM


this is my letter of thanks
to the man with the muddy boots
the dark figure who stands faceless with his arms sternly crossed
to the little boy, a pale blue who tried to warn me
to the female figure who inhabits our house
to everyone who’s tried to help me out

thank you all


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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-09-10 12:40 PM


thoughts very nicely penned,,,

                

Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-09-10 06:43 AM



Sounds of...haunt.

Enjoyed this very much.

Nan
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3 posted 2003-09-10 07:14 AM


Words of appreciation - are surely always appreciated in turn...
littlewing
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4 posted 2003-09-10 09:12 AM


scuffed - sounds to me as if you have them watching over you
lovely writing
xxoo

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2003-09-10 02:46 PM


Ian~
I know this~
Oh, how I so know this~
*Hugelts*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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