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Open Poetry #28
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froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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Michigan
0 posted 2003-09-10 01:27 PM


Touching you
touching me
something we both know
can never be.

But if I could
I surely would
touch you
touching me.
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Sunnyone
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1 posted 2003-09-10 03:27 PM

Hi there...just a title idea...how about 'Untouchable'?  Seems to fit the theme of not quite being able to grasp the one just out of reach.  Liked this one!  ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~
froggy
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2 posted 2003-09-10 03:48 PM

Thank-you Sunnyone for the idea on title.
Thank-you too for the comment.

:-)
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