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Chapter 10
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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Balance After February I didn’t hear from you much But I made sure you heard from me Pathetic I wrote for you I emailed you But I didn’t call That is where I drew the line In May two things happened You came over To help me with something I cooked for you And you told me You had gotten married That it happened fast And you were happy I smiled Told you I was happy for you And wished you well As you were driving home I ran to get to my bathroom before losing balance in break |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
aghhh you are writing my life . . . OMG . . . Susan! I knowwwww this so so well goodness, gave me chills . . . Go smile at yourself please no, ok here . . . have a friend in London and whenever I feel just absolutely awful he says this to me (it is a routine) he says: Darling. what do you see when you look in the mirror? My response: Myself, looking absolutely gorgeous Ok this doesnt always work, but it sure as hell makes me laugh *smile* xxoo |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
wooo hooo, another chapter! the ending oh, god, i know that feeling, when the door closes, the calm lie crumbles, and so do you. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
the story has came to end with such greif,, very well expressed,, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Sue~I love that and will try it the next time I feel awful...thank you! Gemma~lol have to wait for the door to close don't want him to see us cry...thank you. Q~Feelings like that never go away...so she puts it somewhere and tries to go on...thank you.. Susan |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
I smiled Told you I was happy for you And wished you well As you were driving home I ran to get to my bathroom before losing balance ~ Wow. I could feel what you were going through as if it were me. Painfully good. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you Mike.. How's the hangar move going? |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
We are staying prety much busy. After this weekend, it is going to get much more hectic, all the way until we finally begin to move out on the 19/20/21 September. I hope all is well with you, Susan. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Susan, i say (in the words i can use here on this site) forget him! he's not worthy of you ladybug. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Mike~I don't have the hagar projects, but I keep up on what is going on...lol...so, ah, good luck! Dixie~Thank you,  I just wish it was that easy, sometimes someone gets in your blood and you have to chew your own arm off to get out of the trap....I haven't even began to start chewing yet...Susan |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ow....I was that guy, one time.....and would never be again. Now I know how hard the easy way can be, though to see it you have to be man enough to think of both halves. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Have you ever heard the expression: 'Parallel Lives?' Well, after reading this one, I think maybe there is something to it...boy do I know the feelings you put into this!!!! Great write...on to Chapter 11...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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