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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Effervescent Effervescent is the thought That flows the whimsy of night’s court Crows within the moonlight scene Caprice that pans the gold of gleans. Phantoms roaming in the glen Lean upon a midnight’s pen Swirls the dark to sparks of write Willful phantoms of the night Knights that ride desires horse Knights that torch a pungent course Lancing through desires will Until the windmill bends to quill It’s then the morning lights to dawn And crystal dreams of awe are born It’s then the knight can rest his goal And feed the hunger of his soul Effervescent is the course And fantasy is the source. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Your world of fantasy is one fantasmic place, Sir Knight Sy...  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Until the windmill bends to quill =============== there it is ... my Sy-guy line of way cool  Effervescent is the thought That flows the whimsy of night’s court Crows within the moonlight scene Caprice that pans the gold of gleans. =============== Effervescent is a really good word to describe your poetry... Like Champagne and fine wine, your rhymes go down smooth and then tickle our minds with the bubbles of your wisdom's fizz. LOL  Randy may have gas..but youre all class. LOL *winkiewinkie*   When was the last time you felt this high, you are the best I've ever felt. Its so wrong not to be with you Its getting harder to stay away. SH [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (09-09-2003 08:04 AM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very well penned,, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Knights that ride desires horse Knights that torch a pungent course Lancing through desires will Until the windmill bends to quill ~*~ You know what I like about this stanza? That as long as one does, one does. Keep the stories alive, Sy. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Knights that ride desires horse Knights that torch a pungent course Lancing through desires will Until the windmill bends to quill" Love your fantasy poems especially of knights Saddle up Randy and come on over for tea. ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T-Man! Might I say that I found this bubbly piece of caprice and whimsy to be absolutely phantasmagorical!  Huggums, Sluggums! EA |
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MorninGlory Member
since 2003-08-30
Posts 175Oklahoma |
Conjures thoughts of Camelot and kings and queens.. when chivalry was not dead. *sigh* ~ becky |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
This poem sparkles with effervescence...simply sparkles, Sy.. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Effervescent is the course And fantasy is the source. I love your magical fantasies, Seymour. Good morning, Sir Knight.  hugs to you, my friend  Ethel |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"It’s then the morning lights to dawn And crystal dreams of awe are born It’s then the knight can rest his goal And feed the hunger of his soul" Beautiful Sy! Susan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You simply bubble my fancy~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Having a busy day but I thank you all for the lovely comments |
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