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Memories of the Night Before
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Memories of the Night Before |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Dewdrops on a bed of green As dawn slips into view Lying ‘neath the old oak tree Are memories of you… The velvet blanket covers soft Our bodies where we lie The twinkling stars are escorting The sun into the sky… Two empty glasses once held wine Two plates held hunger’s fare Two candles gave us light to dine On love’s ambrosia there… The music made was from our hearts And played throughout the night The candles died, the stars came out We shared the heaven’s light… Now as the morning streaks across The canvas of the dawn A smile is on your sleeping face So peaceful, yet so strong… I lie beside you quietly Content, not needing more The memories still linger From our love the night before… Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
The music made was from our hearts And played throughout the night The candles died, the stars came out We shared the heaven’s light Beautiful feelings and images.. I remember the feeling.. but it has since faded. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Sunnyone, this is so very delicious.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah yes...the night before sigh |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Kaoru, and that feeling can be recaptured, you just have to set the scene!! Thank you...~S~ Hi Kahlil, and thank you...life sometimes provides us with delicious inspirations!! ~S~ Hi passing shadows, and hope this brought back some pleasant memories to you as you read...thank you, my friend...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sunnyone Oh Yeah - the grin comes across the face with a big dreamy smile and everyone you meet wonders what you have been up to. Love the way you put your thoughts together. These are the nice memories that stay with you for a long time. Ariana |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Black_Knight Junior Member
since 2003-09-04
Posts 23England |
Beautiful. "Classic contemporary" is the phrase that comes to mind for such timeless works. As timeless as love itself. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I lie beside you quietly Content, not needing more The memories still linger From our love the night before… Oh my, Sunny, this is awesome writing... just beautiful.  Hugs, my friend  Ethel |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is beautiful and sensous.  Crystal |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww...this is soooooo romantic, sweet friend, and may your heart be a huge photo album with so many happy memories of love to cherish forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) This made my heart smile, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny - the old oak tree, yes, I once knew one well... BC |
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