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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-09-07 11:08 AM

that be not thunder you
hear

lean your ear closer
and you

shall hear my heart
pounding

do not fear the rain
for it's

only my tears flooding
your
footsteps

as you walk away

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2003-09-07 11:16 AM

Excellent wordsmithing here Glenn....

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2003-09-07 11:17 AM

Yes..I feel this..

Susan

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2003-09-07 12:15 PM

Ow, that one hurts! But if it hurts, why do I like it?

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QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

4 posted 2003-09-07 06:44 PM

thanks everyone for your reply's

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

5 posted 2003-09-07 06:59 PM

This hurts

, I know this.
Crystal

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2003-09-08 05:59 PM

Yes, who wants to lose someone they care for...James

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2003-09-08 10:36 PM

let the pain go down the drain
washed in the rain...........

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

8 posted 2003-09-09 12:46 PM

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-09-09 02:14 AM

Joe Houck
Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 324
california

10 posted 2003-09-09 04:05 AM

I liked this
Paints a very sad image...
Expressed very well.
Joe

"The worst vice is advice" (Al Pacino, devil's advocate)

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

11 posted 2003-09-09 04:36 PM

Well-written. So sad.

~ The sun will shine again and dry up all those tears.

EA

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2003-09-09 04:57 PM

(big hugggsssssss) This is sad but beautifully heartfelt, sweet friend, know that while that someone may be walking away, true sunshine will walk into your life real soon as you are so deserving of it! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

13 posted 2003-09-09 05:05 PM

I think that this is exeptional..

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

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