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Open Poetry #28

Why I Love You Best

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2003-09-08 07:27 PM

I Love You Best

I recall the fire in your green eyes
like a wave
I drink the salt
and the wine of your kiss envelops me
as the tenderness of your hands
leave me drifting with the waves
and the children playing in the sand
never notice
but the old man fishing smiles
remembering his days
suddenly we deny what we feel
because we must
listening to the wind blowing
I dance where I want
seeing every dream you ever had
I lie helpless in your arms
as you breathe my life with each sigh
and I don’t have to pretend
that I don’t love you
Cause
I
do

BloomingRose

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-09-08 07:39 PM

very romantically penned,,,

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-09-08 07:50 PM

I recall the fire in your green eyes
like a wave
I drink the salt
and the wine of your kiss envelops me
as the tenderness of your hands
leave me drifting with the waves

Ooooh, Deb, this hopeless romantic simply
loves this. Yep, I do!!

Hugs

Ethel

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2003-09-08 08:59 PM

BloomingRose - now if someone would write me a poem like this, I dream on...

BC

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