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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-09-08 08:30 AM

Cover

at times
I wrap myself
in the wind
soft blended air
of whispered secrets
forgetting it is not
satin sheets
melted to
the contours
of my skin
fitted tugged
and pulled
tightly around
covering me
top to bottom
in butterfly breath
where I can
finally rest
unmade twisted
and tangled
letting go
to where
it unwinds me

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

1 posted 2003-09-08 08:35 AM

Hmmmmm .....

        and Good Morning to you too!!

        Enjoyed the freshness of your words,

                ALWAYS!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2003-09-08 08:48 AM

Ohhhh...this was so nice!!

Susan

MERCURY
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 190
Ireland

3 posted 2003-09-08 08:50 AM

satin sheets
melted to
the contours
of my skin

Great line. Superb poem.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2003-09-08 10:04 AM

Tactile imagery ... I always forget that -- like a guy, hung up on the visual. Taking a poetry lesson now, and such an easy one to absorb.....

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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2003-09-08 10:16 AM

1slick_lady
Sometimes that's nice. Enjoyed

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

6 posted 2003-09-08 11:50 AM

I've always been a fan of satin sheets.....mainly because I've never owned a set of them....

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

7 posted 2003-09-08 05:57 PM

"satin sheets
melted to
the contours
of my skin
fitted tugged
and pulled
tightly around
covering me
top to bottom
in butterfly breath"

Speechless...

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2003-09-08 09:19 PM

sighs

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