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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2003-09-08 04:01 PM

On nights
That like this the moon is full
And there are splinters of light
That lick the tops of already wet waves
As they grace fluid skin
An ivory hue

I am reminded of sand shored boats
Lined in fading light
Framing us

A skeleton of ribs
Enclosing another shade of grey

Come midnight and the moon will find her gown
Of slight filmy cloud
To cover her nakedness
As she journeys towards morning
Satiated perhaps in an early tryst
With the lovers who
Like we would have
Joined the touch of flesh
To bared will
And closed their eyes
To the faults of day

Caress me lady of the sky
That I might remember then
That I might sigh again
Before you robe yourself and hide
Those things I dared not touch

Back when I
Was alive in you….

Wane now
For in my heart I know
There was a time
the nape of your light was mine
and you smiled

Fair on my Fall

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-09-08 04:17 PM

Oh good Lord...

Sigh.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2003-09-08 04:26 PM

"Wane now
For in my heart I know
There was a time
the nape of your light was mine
and you smiled"

Your words give me a longing...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-09-08 04:48 PM

OMG!!
....Damn!

Endlessecho
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 398
I live within myself

4 posted 2003-09-08 04:49 PM

Wow. Such a way with painting a picture. tangible descriptions! Beautifully set down.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2003-09-08 04:57 PM

Uhhhh,  I think you got their attention with
this one,  I am surprised they could even
type out a blubbering reply....

Well done!!!

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

6 posted 2003-09-08 05:35 PM

A skeleton of ribs
Enclosing another shade of grey

Marry me sir?

he he.

you, m friend, are a true wordsmith.

you're in a leauge of yer own y know?

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2003-09-08 06:14 PM

CPat~
Were I to read nothing else this day, my poetic thirst would be thoroughly quenched with this beautiful inking from your pen~

Senses awakened in total awe at this piece, my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

8 posted 2003-09-08 06:31 PM

WOW!!WOW!!!WOW!!!!! you amaze and awe me with the depth and beauty to this write.This one's going to the library.

Crystal

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

9 posted 2003-09-08 11:34 PM

On nights
That like this the moon is full
And there are splinters of light
That lick the tops of already wet waves
As they grace fluid skin
An ivory hue
=========================

ya had me from the first verse...from that point on, all was poetic after glow

Come midnight and the moon will find her gown
Of slight filmy cloud
To cover her nakedness
As she journeys towards morning
Satiated perhaps in an early tryst
With the lovers who
Like we would have
Joined the touch of flesh
To bared will
And closed their eyes
To the faults of day

Caress me lady of the sky
That I might remember then
That I might sigh again
Before you robe yourself and hide
Those things I dared not touch

Back when I
Was alive in you.
=========================

time and time again I say...
you dont play fair...and I love it.
needed a read like this tonite more than even I knew.
thank you for sharing your talents.

When was the last time you felt this high,
you are the best I've ever felt.
Its so wrong not to be with you
Its getting harder to stay away.

SH

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

10 posted 2003-09-09 08:23 AM

Im not done with this one...oh no...far from it..Im thinking I could read this one till I go moth blind..then I'll read it with my fingertips.

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

11 posted 2003-09-09 08:43 AM

Wonderfully rich in images and emotion, Ron..

believe in what your heart feels...

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

12 posted 2003-09-09 09:27 AM

oh my god
speechless

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