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Open Poetry #28

September’s Clouds

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-09-04 04:41 PM

September’s Clouds

tears play a concert
today in black and white
sharply flat trying
to find the right key
vertical tune playing
in treble salty sheets
as September’s clouds
are pounding here

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (09-04-2003 04:42 PM).]

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2003-09-04 05:30 PM

spetmeber is a song in itself i the feeling of this, yes

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

2 posted 2003-09-04 05:39 PM

Thanks for sharing the moment...it felt right.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

3 posted 2003-09-04 05:47 PM

I can absolutely hear it! Man-oh-man, you're good!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2003-09-05 11:14 AM

vertical tune playing
in treble salty sheets

Simply stunning... I like this very much!

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

5 posted 2003-09-05 11:33 AM

This is fantastic.I can hear it as if it were here.

Crystal

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

6 posted 2003-09-05 10:29 PM

Let's bump this Florida person....I have a feeling she won't be posting much on this blustery day.

Hang in there, Red!

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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

7 posted 2003-09-08 06:05 PM

This is amazing..can't believe I missed it.

*bump*

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

8 posted 2003-09-08 06:12 PM

you amaze me

and a

Instant karma's gonna get you.

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

9 posted 2003-09-09 09:53 AM

Stormy weather!

Good luck, safe harbor.

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