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wranx
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since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

0 posted 2003-09-08 11:19 AM

Its morning again
and I've awakened without you

Awakened beside an empty space
the place in my bed
that should be filled

With brown-eyed girl
body heat that isn't mine
and sleepy sighs

And the fresh memories
of the twining strivings
of your leggy madness

But, it's morning again
And I've awakened find you

Occupying that hollow space
the place in my heart
that your spirit has filled

Its morning

"In looking Northward, I see a light"

[This message has been edited by wranx (09-08-2003 11:20 AM).]

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-09-08 11:22 AM

...and you got up
and went to log it in,
as proof of survival.

I enjoy every write.

Every one.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-09-08 11:23 AM

wranx
You can't win them all. LOL Enjoyed

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

3 posted 2003-09-08 11:28 AM

Exactly so, Karilea

And Sy, m'friend
I've lost most such encounters...in the past

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

4 posted 2003-09-08 12:42 PM

awww...

Sweet one, Ed Specialty.

*hugs*

~Tier

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2003-09-08 12:44 PM

Lovely...melancholy...yet lovely.
~soft smiles, Nancy~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have sand in my shoes ~

MorninGlory
Member

since 2003-08-30

Posts 175
Oklahoma

6 posted 2003-09-08 01:00 PM

This empty feeling, I have felt it many mornings. Beautifully written.

~ becky

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2003-09-08 02:35 PM

Ed ...Empty, yet filled. I understand this well!

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

8 posted 2003-09-08 02:58 PM

Oh, that feeling.....know it well...

Well said, Ed

Ed

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Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

9 posted 2003-09-08 03:34 PM

mastery

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 2003-09-08 04:34 PM

What should be so often isn't... and you've captured that perfectly. I know this. *S*

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2003-09-08 04:40 PM

Ed, such a beautiful, loving write,
even if it is sad.

Hugs

Ethel

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

12 posted 2003-09-08 04:41 PM

Smiling...yet again...

This is just lovely, Ed.

Hugs, you...
If you judge people, you have no time to love them.
--Mother Teresa

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

13 posted 2003-09-08 06:57 PM

and within that light
burning bright
the morning shall come
as each new day does
Awake, my child
to the warmth
Quell the cold
by the woodstove
Another log on the fire
burning ever higher
brings hand to heart
fingers splayed
there is no time
only space
for the hollow
of heart
has been replaced

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise