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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-09-07 10:54 PM

exit softly,

on tips of toes
as you began,

an inkling,
a premontion,

wisps of pastels
cross horizons end,

slip away gracefully,

do not shout
amid harshness
of premature wintry winds,

kiss me tenderly,

breath of babies,
warmth of lips,

like the first one
all over again,

and when we part,

whisper to me
of your return,

on spring's equinox,
an affair to renew,

but for now,
dear friend

farewell,
to you.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (09-09-2003 08:47 PM).]

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2003-09-07 11:00 PM

Michele...this is so softly beautiful.
I truly enjoyed the read.
Hugs,
~Vicky
If you judge people, you have no time to love them.
--Mother Teresa

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-09-07 11:13 PM

how soft and lovely this penning is,,,

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

3 posted 2003-09-08 12:05 PM

This is beautiful just like you.

Crystal

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-09-08 03:21 AM

love the ending!

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

5 posted 2003-09-08 11:59 AM

Sweet. I've never thought of it that way, but then, I've never been a woman. This a gentle and sensitive portrayal, even for a goddess.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-09-08 01:21 PM

"and when we part,

whisper to me
of your return,

on spring's equinox,
an affair to renew,

but for now,
dear friend

farewell,
to you."

OMG!!How beautiful!!
~Hugs~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have sand in my shoes ~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-09-08 01:40 PM

Michele, you paint such beautiful pictures of the
seasons with your words. I'm keeping this picture.
This was simply beautiful...and this ending is awesome!!

and when we part,

whisper to me
of your return,

on spring's equinox,
an affair to renew,

but for now,
dear friend

farewell,
to you.

Hugs to you, lady

Ethel

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

8 posted 2003-09-08 03:59 PM

this is so quiet..

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2003-09-08 07:56 PM

Michele . . .
this is achingly beautiful
bittersweet

and when we part,

whisper to me
of your return,

on spring's equinox,
an affair to renew,

xxoo

"The story of life is quicker than the wink of an eye . . . the story of love is hello and goodbye. Until we meet again." - James Marshall Hendrix

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

10 posted 2003-09-09 08:42 PM

nice,,,,,really nice. nice job

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2003-09-09 08:46 PM

enjoyed...James

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

12 posted 2003-09-10 01:54 AM

Michele~ Enjoyed this soft touch of yours.

I hope you're doing ok girlie.

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