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WHAT IS IN THE BOX ?!? . . . . . . . . . . (Senryu)
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WHAT IS IN THE BOX ?!? . . . . . . . . . . (Senryu) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light 
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+*+*+ Anticipation Is half of the fun, you say! ~But I cannot wait! I must learn patience? All good things come in good time? ~And you call this fun? I'm a girl at heart. I cannot wait much longer. May I open box? May I take a peek? ~No? Then may I have a clue? Please don't torture me! May I have gift now? The suspense is killing me! WHAT IS IN THE BOX?!? +*+*+ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Linda, you do amaze me . . . and lesse . . . if it were my surprise I would want it to be happiness *smile* xxoo |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
LOL...this is priceless, Linda...too cute!  Don't you just HATE having to wait?! LOL Hugs, you...  ~Vicky If you judge people, you have no time to love them. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
ok i give up,, heres whats in the box. /pip/Forum81/HTML/002428.html lol Qute write lady poetess |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 patience, patience... |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
What's in the box? A frog, maybe? With patience and a kiss you can have a prince! Terrific write! LOVE those senryus! 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sue, this poem just now popped into my head as I was recalling my recent birthday. My friends and family know that next to my giving presents, I love receiving them--and they love to make me wait! I suppose when we're told to get in touch with our inner child, this isn't exactly what 'they' are talking about! lol  This poem is somewhat of a dramatization! lol Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Vicky, so you do know what I'm talking about! lol I wouldn't torture you, you could open your present from me right away! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
QjQ ~ Than-Q! It truly was worth the wait! lol Huggums, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
passing shadows ~ Yeppers! Patience is a virtue all right!--and hard to come by at times! lol EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
JilGirl ~ "With patience and a kiss you can have a prince!" ~ I guess you are right, Dear Sagacious One! I really would prefer kissing princes over frogs!--Hm! That doesn't sound right! Oh, well. I'm sure you know what I mean! lol EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-08-2003 11:57 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh Linda, I know just how you feel, though I also love giving more than receiving, you can't help but feel so excited and want to see the presents so much! (kiss on cheek) Like I said in my journal, I chose the name Mistletoe Angel because I believe everyday should be Christmas to the extent that we give and share our love to one another and not through presents everyday but through unconditional love! (big hugggsssssss) Hehehe...can I have a clue now, pretty please, hehehe, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gee, can I come see you open it??? Maybe it's one of those Chippendale dancers!  Cute write! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
What's in the box..Um has anybody seen the movie SE7EN? I'm hoping for your sake Linda you're getting a nicer surprise |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
FABULOUS Oh my gosh, I have NO patience at all. However, someone once told me that if you pray for patience, God will test you. Scared me to pieces and it's one thing I stay away from in my prayers. What's In the Box?? I say LOVE! When you open it, butterflies of love will come floating out. Smiles and loves, Marti Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ooooh, I love presents! Can I take a peek? Love this Linda. hugs, Chris |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
What box? Oh THAT box! Oh all right, you pesky child! It's another box! Well done, Linda..very charming. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light [This message has been edited by kayjay (09-08-2003 10:33 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Linda, Linda, it's just me, in that box!!!! BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah ~ Like you, I get the biggest charge out of watching my friends and family open their gifts from me. I put a great deal of thought into chosing the perfect presents! Love you, Angel Boy! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Nancy ~ Funny that you should mention the Chippendale dancers! On Friday I went with some of my girlfriends to watch firefighters strip for charity!--and I bought their pinup calendar! I enjoyed my read before I went to sleep! Please don't tell Sy about me going to a strip show. I don't want to ruin his illusion that I am a real angel!  EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Aenimal ~ I just asked my daughter if she had seen that movie--and she had! OMG I most definitely would not want to open a box like that!  EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marti ~ That would be loverly!--butterflies of love floating out of the box! Truly a gift for the spirit. Loveya! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Chris ~ Sure! You can peek with me and shake the box. I've come to realize that patience is one of the virtues that I am lacking in! lol Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ken ~ Oh, no!--not another box! I'm never going to get to the heart of the matter! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
BC ~ Well now, Dear William, if you are my surprise in the box, I'm even more eager to open it! Huggums, Linda |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Do, please, repost this come Christmas. Every mother can hang it on her refrigerator for the little ones.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sunshine ~ I like getting requests for a poem of mine to be reposted! ~ Will, do Dear Ray of Sun! Sunny hugs, EA |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I'm a girl at heart. I cannot wait much longer. May I open box? Love that character trait about her! This was so much fun Linda~ Do a summersault why don't you!!! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Opening early Hinders celebration day We must be patient  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
BluesSerenade ~ O)O)O)...EA summersaulting as requested by the Bluesy One! Thanks, Lori! ~ May your day be full of fun & laughter! Loves 'n huggums, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Nan ~ Yes, teacher. I will do my bestest to be more patient... --and thank you for the senryuic words of wisdom! ~ May all the good you do in helping and guiding others be returned to you tenfold! Loving hugs & smiles, Linda |
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