Open Poetry #28 |
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Not To Be Forgotten |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
It was yesterday, that I am sure of, when my heart skipped, my mind went awry and my mouth became suddenly dry and speechless. Yesterday, almost four decades ago when God let me see, let me know a person who is now half of all I am or will be. You barely knew me, that tall slender sheepish grin.The hazel eyes that so adored every curve, every line of elegance.I knew then, that moment that I loved you, though in my awkward way, my stumbling manner.....I failed to say it. You thought I was a bother, that no matter what, no matter when....I was just another male after the appeal of what he saw.....Yes, I was and I saw a very appealing and sensuous young woman, still growing, yet so ready for the savoring of a first kiss. I still remember that first kiss, the first moment sitting beside you, the first touch of what I had never felt before...Even now, after all these years, you still know how to wind my clock and make me tick.... The clock is ticking, though slower than before.And the fires still burn....Come, stoke my fire, light the candles...Let me taste the sweetness of a kiss I shall never forget... Have you forgotten? |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I'm sure she hasn't forgotten! You're an incurable romantic, and we love you for it! ~K~ |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I sure hope she hasn't ![]() ![]() Crystal |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
She hasn't!! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Glad you pursued her and made her yours as this does tell a warm inviting love story. Good write Barry I really enjoyed it. Eric The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Four decades is a long time Barry... May I congratulate you and your lucky lady on a wonderful marriage. Beautiful post here as well....sure made me sigh! ~Smiles & Hugs to you both, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Nice! |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Barry... Beautiful words spoken so softly from a true romantic. Enjoyed very very much. It's been 3 1/2 decades for me and the fires still burn...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
First, may I congratulate you both on four decades together? How wonderfully uncommon in this day and age, Barry. Second, she could never forget when she has your beautiful words to remind her of your love. A lovely write, my friend. Patricia |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx to all....we have been married 34 years. And I have known her 38 years....so, almost 4 decades.... we have our moments, just as everyone does. Both the sweetness and the trials... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Congratulations, on everything achieved, and everything still to be captured...continue the dream... and she will live forever in your soul. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
There is much love and memories in this beautiful poem.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
That absolutely does it! I want me a poet man!--a right brainer for a change! lol ![]() ![]() EA |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
How could she have forgotten??? Lovely words, Magnus! Corinne |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry...So nice to hear of this kind of lasting love and passion! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I doubt she could forget...but if she did, have fun reminding her ![]() |
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