.....Hitchiking Note.......

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Open Poetry #28

.....Hitchiking Note.......

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-09-07 01:02 PM

Hitchhiker of the wind n tides
my note in the wine bottle rides

someday someplace sometime
someone passing time

shall discover my note inside
and read my love for a bride

and know that i tried for the tide n time
for the hitchhiker note in rhyme

to wash upon a shore and slide
lovingly into the hands of my bride

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

1 posted 2003-09-07 01:28 PM

Awwww! How sweet. I hope your love finds your bottle.

Hugs, Marti

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

2 posted 2003-09-07 06:19 PM

I hope the message gets through.

great write Q

Instant karma's gonna get you.

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

3 posted 2003-09-07 06:20 PM

This is sweet.My wish is that it gets there.

Crystal

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-09-08 01:05 AM

"Hitchhiker of the wind n tides"

~ what a novel way of putting it!

May your hitchhiker get picked up by the right person!--now where exactly did you release the bottle? lol