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Open Poetry #28

Rose Essence In Twodom

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2003-09-06 11:25 PM

I breathe in
the mist of you,
feel your presence.
And, I am instantly
transported into mystical
realms of Twodom. Hand
in hand, we gather the fragrant
roses to our hearts. Appreciative
of each delicate petal, each
waxy leaf. You murmur
your name for me....Rose.
I feel like a beautiful
Rose. Ready to unfold, ready
to display my true
inner beauty....the beauty
that you bring out in me.
All about you is the sweet
essence of love true and eternal.
And, we can never be seperated;
for, in this realm of Twodom,
we are bonded together.
We are one heart, one soul.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-09-07 12:41 PM

very nice write n read,,,

scuffedshoe2
Junior Member

since 2003-08-04

Posts 39

2 posted 2003-09-07 12:43 PM

It makes me smile, its what i am feeling now exactly...

-ian (WI)

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-09-07 02:49 AM

"Rose Essence In Twodom" ~ how perfectly lovely this poem is--and the love that it depicts!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2003-09-07 09:36 AM

Nice!

Susan

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-09-07 03:00 PM

All about you is the sweet
essence of love true and eternal.
And, we can never be seperated;
for, in this realm of Twodom,
we are bonded together.
We are one heart, one soul.

How beautiful this is, Rose....
just beautiful!!