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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-09-06 08:59 PM


Those Feelings

Do you know those feelings you have
when someone cares for you, or you
think they do, or you want them to?
These are the feelings that dreams
are made of, when things go right
they are the feelings that can
grow into love.

And when things go wrong?

Yes, you probably know
those feelings too.

I certainly do.

JamesLee
September05
2003


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1 posted 2003-09-06 09:03 PM


Naw, never felt that one. (this week, anyway) LOL.
Just kidding, this may be one of those nearly 'universal' experiences.

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2 posted 2003-09-06 09:17 PM


Ditto!  Join the club....been around a few
thousand years....

Well said JM...

QjQ
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3 posted 2003-09-06 09:46 PM


penned well,,,

    

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4 posted 2003-09-07 10:36 AM


Oh, do I ever! I like the way you carried this poem visually -- the very shape of it adds to the message.

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Kahlil
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5 posted 2003-09-07 10:42 AM


Know them very well.  Very creative write, I enjoyed it.  ~K~
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6 posted 2003-09-07 10:50 AM


And when things go wrong?

Yes, you probably know
those feelings too.

I certainly do.


Yes, James, I think we all have.......
if not in the present, in the past...
or in the future.
Hugs to you, friend  
Ethel


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7 posted 2003-09-07 07:15 PM


I hear you loud and clear my friend
Crystal

Bill Charles
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8 posted 2003-09-07 07:47 PM


James - I know them too, I know them too...

BC

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9 posted 2003-09-07 07:52 PM


Enjoyed this one James...
Know this only too well.
~Hugs~

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   I still have sand in my shoes ~

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