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In Waltz At Harvest Shores
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In Waltz At Harvest Shores |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
There is music softly in the sways Hypnotic melody in a frothy water plays We stand as spheres, clothed in moonlight And bodies brush bring stars to light This close to see the endless spell That keeps attuned where wonders dwell The surf pulls back the last of doubt In silver send to swirl about That held inside so long before Without a way to say of more But here with you a dance begun Beneath the harvest moon as one Together glows illumined souls Entranced in waltz the surf beholds A right and left of soft and sweet In dance together each heartbeat Copyright Kkh 9/6/03 |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Very romantically penned,,, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Kathleen...so romatically beautiufl as always... I could actually picture that Harvest moon. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lovely, as always TD! You are an artist. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
enjoyed the dance.Well done. Jason |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
ThisDiamond...Very beautiful and well-rhymed poem of love. I love the imagery of the moonlit beach and two lovers, hand in hand, beneath the Moon at the edge of the Sea. ***Ivy Rose |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your words swayed and undulated across this sea of blue--and I found myself doing the same... Poetry in motion, Dear TD!  EA |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hey TD, now you've got me thinking of Neil Young on this fine morning . . . beautiful writing xxoo |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Aye, 'tis time for the harvest moon on high to lend to autumn a late summer's sigh to feel the lace of graceful web before the season lays a white bed... ~*~ Now look at you. Inspiring me...  You do such wonderful things! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
That held inside so long before Without a way to say of more But here with you a dance begun Beneath the harvest moon as one Together glows illumined souls Entranced in waltz the surf beholds A right and left of soft and sweet In dance together each heartbeat Kathleen, how beautiful this is!! I love it.  Hugs Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-07-2003 03:56 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Seems I wasn't the only one who enjoys a stroll on the beach. Lovely words K. Very nicely done. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I could hear the melody in my head and feel the movements in my heart.Beautifully done.  Crystal |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just beautiful. |
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