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Abe
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since 2003-05-28
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Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end!

0 posted 2003-09-06 05:55 PM



UNTIL THE END, MY FRIEND

I don’t ever think I’ve had
Unless with, Kennedy
Something move into my soul
And the heart, of me.

The pain I feel inside
For all the human race
Makes me feel ashamed inside
And, want to hide my face.

I know I’ve always known
How cruel, we all could be
But, in the past years
Saw, more, than, I should see.

Nobody deserves
The wrath of the hate
But, then I stop and think
We didn’t have to wait.

I’ve seen it all my life
But, didn’t care to look
Until, I started writing
To put it in a book.

A book, I shouldn’t written
For, the words hurt so deep
And the memories we know
Are very hard, to keep.

But, it will never change
Until, we’re no longer here
Because the human, is the death
Of, life, on Earth, I fear.

Del "Abe" Jones

© Copyright 2003 Del - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-09-06 09:10 PM


Hello, Abe, and welcome to Passions.
Somehow, I think perhaps we put too much stock in HUMANS as the ultimate life form. OMG, could it be that another life form is actually the 'meek' that shall inherit this earth? I don't know. But I haven't given up on us as a species just yet. Look around this place and read, and discover a beautiful part of humanity within these blue walls.
namaste, peace
and welcome

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2003-09-07 12:37 PM


Abe, I know the loss
as do many of us
of the times of which
you write.

Continue writing.

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (09-07-2003 12:45 PM).]

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2003-09-07 06:00 PM


Abe~
You reach out and touch so many with your writing~
I'm thankful to be one of those who receive~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com   

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
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Oklahoma
4 posted 2003-09-07 06:04 PM


Abe, by reaching out to so many with your writes you will bless the souls of many.Keep reaching out and let us enjoy what you have to say.
Crystal

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