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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
As the wind blows and rustles through the leaves The branches sway to and fro from the trees The chillness of the air as I take a deep breath Gives me a feeling that summer has left The colors of the leaves, orange and brown As they begin to fall to the ground It's time for pants and sweats once more And a nice warm jacket as I sit at the shore The waves get a little more intense As the wind blows hard against the crest As the leaves drop from the tree It shed it's leaves so that new ones it may bring The beuatiful colors of orange, gold, and brown Seem to abound as they fall to the ground And in my mind I seem to recall The warmth and brightness that comes with the Fall Crystal |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
And in my mind I seem to recall The warmth and brightness that comes with the Fall oh, the colors are beutiful, but id take a hot august night anyday over the chill of autumn pretty poem |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"And in my mind I seem to recall The warmth and brightness that comes with the Fall" ~ Your poem is a lovely reminder of my second favorite season! (Spring is my favorite but Fall is a close second!)  Thank you! ~ May you soar high and free with the fresh winds of autumn...  Linda |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Images so crisp and clear to my heart...my favorite time of year. Apples, fireplaces, the scent of the forest changes...coats grow thick and stew bubbles Need to write. Thanks. TD |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
(((((hugs))))) I just loved reading this. Refreshing breath of air!!!  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
inkedgodess:I hear you.This was just some thoughts.My favorite season is summer  Linda:Thank you my sweet friend  ThisDiamond:Glad you enjoyed.We each hace our own season and I'm glad I could share alittle of your with you. SharaRose:Thank you so much sweet lady. Crystal |
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MERCURY Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 190Ireland |
This fall is eloquently described whereas your work shall never fall. Great poem. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Nice writing crystal..i love fall and winter..it is a magical world...thanks for the words... Goldenrose. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Mercury:Thank you that's such a sweet thing to say Goldenrose:I'm glad you enjoyed. Crystal |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Crystal, This was very beautiful!! (Congratulations on breaking 1000 posts!) Susan |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjo your read |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Crystal A lovely write, enjoyed the read. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Crystal~ I love the Autumn ... and you've reminded me of some of the beautiful reasons why~ Hey ! Drop me an email please~ noles1@totcon.com *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
A very beautiful poem. :-) |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Are you? Are they? Yes and yes, I think. And those blue eyes see the hard of it, accept the beauty that is given alongside. A quality poem, and a quality point of view. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Crystal, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love the autumn because of its colors and harvests! (kiss on cheek) Who says you can't wear shorts during the autumn, I wear mine in the winter, LOL! This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Crystal, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Susan:Thank you very much. vandana:Glad you enjoyed. SY:Glad you enjoyed, it means alot. Marge:Thanks so much.I dropped one did you not get it.Will drop another one today. froggy:Thanks alot. Crystal |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
James_A_Fraser:Thank you very much. Noah:LOL I hear you.I wear my shorts yearround too. Your replies are always so sweet and bring me smiles. James:Thank you very much my friend. Crystal |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
This is lovely! OOOOh made me look forward to autumn/fall even more! i love crunching in the leaves! Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
gemjop:Glad you enjoyed it. Crystal |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very lovely penning,, lady poetess |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Ahhh you're the first one to call me lady poetess.You get a for that. Glad you enjoyed it. Crystal |
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symphony_of_thoughts Member
since 2003-08-03
Posts 95Somewhere |
I really liked this poem. You wrote all the reasons I liked fall like you were reading my mind. Fall is my favorite season by the way if you havn't noticed already. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
symphony of thoughts:I'm glad I could share it with you and that you enjoyed it. Crystal |
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