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angelblueyes
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0 posted 2003-09-03 09:07 PM


As the wind blows and rustles through the leaves
The branches sway to and fro from the trees
The chillness of the air as I take a deep breath
Gives me a feeling that summer has left
The colors of the leaves, orange and brown
As they begin to fall to the ground
It's time for pants and sweats once more
And a nice warm jacket as I sit at the shore
The waves get a little more intense
As the wind blows hard against the crest
As the leaves drop from the tree
It shed it's leaves so that new ones it may bring
The beuatiful colors of orange, gold, and brown
Seem to abound as they fall to the ground
And in my mind I seem to recall
The warmth and brightness that comes with the Fall

Crystal

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inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2003-09-03 10:39 PM


And in my mind I seem to recall
The warmth and brightness that comes with the Fall

oh, the colors are beutiful,
but id take a hot august night anyday over the chill of autumn
pretty poem

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-09-03 10:58 PM


"And in my mind I seem to recall
The warmth and brightness that comes with the Fall"

~ Your poem is a lovely reminder of my second favorite season! (Spring is my favorite but Fall is a close second!)

Thank you!

~ May you soar high and free with the fresh winds of autumn...


Linda

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2003-09-03 11:01 PM


Images so crisp and clear to my heart...my favorite time of year.
Apples, fireplaces, the scent of the forest changes...coats grow thick and stew bubbles
Need to write. Thanks. TD

SharaRose
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4 posted 2003-09-03 11:07 PM


(((((hugs))))) I just loved reading this. Refreshing breath of air!!!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

angelblueyes
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5 posted 2003-09-03 11:55 PM


inkedgodess:I hear you.This was just some thoughts.My favorite season is summer

Linda:Thank you my sweet friend

ThisDiamond:Glad you enjoyed.We each hace our own season and I'm glad I could share alittle of your with you.

SharaRose:Thank you so much sweet lady.

Crystal

MERCURY
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6 posted 2003-09-04 04:42 AM


This fall is eloquently described whereas your work shall never fall. Great poem.
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7 posted 2003-09-04 06:17 AM


Nice writing crystal..i love fall and winter..it is a magical world...thanks for the words...

Goldenrose.

angelblueyes
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8 posted 2003-09-04 08:07 AM


Mercury:Thank you that's such a sweet thing to say

Goldenrose:I'm glad you enjoyed.

Crystal

Susan Caldwell
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9 posted 2003-09-04 09:42 AM


Crystal,

This was very beautiful!!

(Congratulations on breaking 1000 posts!)

Susan

vandana
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10 posted 2003-09-04 09:48 AM


enjo your read
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2003-09-04 09:50 AM


Crystal
A lovely write, enjoyed the read.

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12 posted 2003-09-04 04:19 PM


Crystal~
I love the Autumn ... and you've reminded me of some of the beautiful reasons why~

Hey !  Drop me an email please~
noles1@totcon.com

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com   

froggy
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13 posted 2003-09-04 04:25 PM


A very beautiful poem.

:-)


James_A_Fraser
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14 posted 2003-09-04 04:28 PM


Are you? Are they? Yes and yes, I think.

And those blue eyes see the hard of it, accept the beauty that is given alongside. A quality poem, and a quality point of view.

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15 posted 2003-09-04 05:01 PM




(smiles) Oh Crystal, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love the autumn because of its colors and harvests! (kiss on cheek) Who says you can't wear shorts during the autumn, I wear mine in the winter, LOL! This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Crystal, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

JamesMichael
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16 posted 2003-09-04 06:22 PM


Nice writing...James
angelblueyes
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17 posted 2003-09-05 11:17 AM


Susan:Thank you very much.

vandana:Glad you enjoyed.

SY:Glad you enjoyed, it means alot.

Marge:Thanks so much.I dropped one did you not get it.Will drop another one today.

froggy:Thanks alot.

Crystal


angelblueyes
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18 posted 2003-09-05 11:20 AM


James_A_Fraser:Thank you very much.

Noah:LOL I hear you.I wear my shorts yearround too. Your replies are always so sweet and bring me smiles.

James:Thank you very much my friend.

Crystal

gemjop
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19 posted 2003-09-07 06:07 PM


This is lovely! OOOOh made me look forward to autumn/fall even more! i love crunching in the leaves!

Instant karma's gonna get you.

angelblueyes
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20 posted 2003-09-07 06:12 PM


gemjop:Glad you enjoyed it.
Crystal

QjQ
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21 posted 2003-09-07 06:36 PM


very lovely penning,, lady poetess

       

angelblueyes
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22 posted 2003-09-07 06:38 PM


Ahhh you're the first one to call me lady poetess.You get a for that. Glad you enjoyed it.
Crystal

symphony_of_thoughts
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23 posted 2003-09-07 07:31 PM


I really liked this poem.  You wrote all the reasons I liked fall like you were reading my mind.  Fall is my favorite season by the way if you havn't noticed already.
angelblueyes
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24 posted 2003-09-07 07:35 PM


symphony of thoughts:I'm glad I could share it with you and that you enjoyed it.
Crystal

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