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Seeking Hope
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Seeking Hope |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Seeking Hope When I look in your eyes I can see The man that you were meant to be But also I see the shadow of pain Which washes your soul in silent rain And although I long to hold your hand And tell you that I understand I feel that you’ll never be free Of the sorrow that coats you in misery When I look within I can see a light It shines there in your soul so bright But sorrow clouds your heart with fear And makes your days seem dark and drear Even though I want to help you see The light that glows eternally I can’t believe you’ll ever let go Of the fear that you have come to know When I look at you I see love divine It’s there within you all the time But you’ve shut your eyes and cannot see Its light and hope shine constantly So although I want to help you cope You can’t acknowledge there’s still hope Because a heart that lives in fear Will never be able to hold hope near Happiness lives within its there for you And if you seek it out you’ll find its true Marsha Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112 |
Time are sides of two, Ying/Yang Hope/Despair , you hold hope to give As time turns it good he have you hold hope for him |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
For whomever you write, 'tis words of wisdom. Hugs...as always. Sun |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
I feel like I have read the "book of wisdom". Beautifully done and words that I can relate to. Enjoyed very much. Ariana |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Marsha dear friend, as always you've touched my heart with your beautiful true words. big hugs to you sweetie Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you know Marsha..this is perfect for someone I once knew... I guess it can be almost universal in meaning.. hugss and love Maureen |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
But sorrow clouds your heart with fear And makes your days seem dark and drear We're both aware I'm not a he But these lines could have been for me. *S* Beautiful work as always, my friend... it's good to see you posting! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just a beautiful piece |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaDarlingGirl~ Memories of today's anniversary fall-in-smile upon my face~ I adore ... simply adore YOU my MarshaGrace~  PiPITIS - it WAS A HAPPENING~  You, my friend ... are so true MarshaLOVE ... yes, I do~ Missing you sweet girlie~ But remembering your thoughtfulness to all~ You are my jewel of September's Fall~ New Poet Richey will never be the same because of a gentle poetess who happens to wear YOUR name~  Okay ... got the sentiments out ... now - Your writing is as tender as they come~ I love you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
 Cause I can ... and because it needs to be read by many~ *Huglets* ~*Me ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sis, as always...your work is simply beautiful! i loved every line of this, full of so much emotion. and as always, perfect rhyme. i have missed your work terribly! love you amy  "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*tickling* at MarshaLove~  This ENTIRE MONTH brings so many wonderful memories of our gathering ... I think EVERY DAY of September should be in celebration of those special moments remembered~  LOVE YOU Girlie~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
WOW!!! Words that were taken right from my very thoughts. Been reading my mail? hehe  It's nice to see my thoughts written in front of me. I can't ever seem to get them out this way. Thank you for sharing. I know someone just like this, but I don't think he will ever see. It's so sad to see someone suffer like that, and feel helpless to make them see the light. And what makes it worse is (he) is such a delight of a person himself when he's not so deep into the sorrow and sadness. One of 2 saddest things I have ever exp'd in my life to see these delightful people this way.  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! [This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-16-2003 01:05 PM).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Marsha, this is such a nice way to tell someone that you are there for them when they are ready to open up...you are one nice lady...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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