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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox 
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addiction isnt good for us we'll die someday its your fault, you got me hooked and now i'll die someday you got to choose, i got dragged in all the pictures you took, places youve been fly like smoke up over our heads i'm addicted to second-hand smoke i can never kick the habit, i blame it on you drove with a cigarrette dangling in your fingers i listened to your stories of kids too perfect for their own good you breathed out words in ghastly shapes on our walks up and down a dream on jamerson now i'm addicted to the to the memory i'm addicted to your second-hand smoke and i will die someday ive been fighting off withdrawal cant sleep, cant stay awake the only one who understood me took his habit and he flew up north he will die someday happy being me, smoky rings of freedom now i'm addicted to second-hand smoke and i know we'll die someday |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
We're all going to die someday -- it's a question of regret and forgiveness... Interesting write. Welcome, stranger... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssssss) Oh my gosh, you MUST kick the havit, dearest friend, you deserve so much more and you have a blessed life ahead of you free of those carcogens one can afflict you with! (sigh) Here's angel hugs of strength and hope for you, sweet friend, this is a powerful debut, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!  May love and liht always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Yep, if the smoking doesn't get me...the genetic predisposition for a massive heart attack will.. Might as well enjoy myself.. lol..oh I am such a ray of sunshine.. Susan |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There ARE all forms of addictions. I hope you, ahm, develop a Passionate one?  Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
i understand this. I get firsthand smoke all the time and Ive tried to quit and its not that easy. Then on another wave its like the person who breaths the secondhand at you is someone you care about. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
how optimistic lol... very true though. "Vision without action is a daydream. Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
We are ALL breathing second hand smoke, and if that doesn't get us, you can bet something else will when it's time for us to go!! The trick is to figure out who and what is good for your life, then get rid of what isn't. Enjoyed this read for your first post, and welcome to you, friend!! ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Very topical first post. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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