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To Fill a Pause
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To Fill a Pause |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
There is always a pause. From the fingers to the lips...we ache for contact. We dance to the distance of only inches. Allowing our breath alone to brush warm across the skin. This is our prayer of desire. To make love through the holy space between us. It is only a pause. And then...a new prayer begins. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ericc WEll done, enjoyed. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
You say things in such a way, it feels like theyve never ever been said, nor seen, or felt.  Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I know this moment...and you worded it perfectly! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
This is so beautiful... But then, all of your poems are. *smiles* ~Tier |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, so beautiful is this.  Hugs  Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesomely beautiful |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
giving new meaning to the phrase the pause that refreshes beautiful, softly sensual |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) To fill each distance...continent by continent...chasm by chasm, gap by gap...is the true beauty of love, feeling each note in its true melody! (big hugggsssssss) Absolutely spellbinding, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
It's like you read my thoughts when you write sometimes Eric. This was one of the most beautiful pieces I have read. Keeping it to go back to. Thanks, TD |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Eric: To make love through the holy space between us. this is the single most beautiful thing I have read today xxoo |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Yes, a new prayer begins...This is marvelous, Eric. Patricia |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A wonderful morning read! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
This is just beautiful... ~K~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Now that's a Sunday service I wouldn't snore through......Pretty piece of poetry, my friend! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is absolutely beautiful.  Crystal |
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