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Open Poetry #28

I wish you well

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-08-05 09:14 AM

I remember
how every word
every touch
every thought led to you

I remember
how on that day
I left you
I knew you
would see someone else that night

I remember
I thought
through my pain
that one day you would miss me
and I was right

then one day
after I had forgotten
you called
and I was sad
for you

for I had moved on
and was rich in my family
and you were
engaged
and just wanted to know
was I available to
save you?

and all I could say
was I once offered you my world
and we were young and foolish
and now I have nothing
but a memory for you
but I will cherish it
and wish you well

[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (08-05-2003 02:04 PM).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2003-08-05 09:16 AM

Enjoyed...sometimes it comes to this...James

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2003-08-05 09:19 AM

Sometimes you have to move on. enjoyed!

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

3 posted 2003-08-05 09:49 AM

Bitter-sweet the memories...

Enjoyed!

~Tier

Gina Culliney
Member

since 2003-03-08

Posts 170

4 posted 2003-08-05 05:08 PM

Love's first scar's so richly expressed in the strokes of your pen. Well done and sadly profound, Darkling.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2003-08-05 07:30 PM

and all I could say
was I once offered you my world

very fitting for me...and how true...all one can do is wish the best for the other.

*s
M

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2003-08-05 07:54 PM

nice when you leave with a good feeling, isnt it?

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

7 posted 2003-08-05 08:00 PM

So often so bitter-sweet.
So often a near-miss.

Captured well, Sir.

s.a.g.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2003-08-05 08:01 PM

enjoy your read

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