Open Poetry #28 |
Night Whispers in Wait |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Night Whispers in Wait I opened up that part of me that no one's seen in years. It was Pandora's box you see night whispers bringing tears. Of yesterdays, translucent state perceptions eased by time. We reasoned out the cause of such, my thoughts always in rhyme. I'll pretend you see, that all is well and lend her mine, this smile. I know though, that the news will hurt, she said she'd need a while. I've got a front row seat in watch, vibrations pound their send. The raven's darkened message looms despite the shield's extend. No miracles of rarity nor mystics to displace this summer as it takes its toll on hers, my sister's face. I see reflections, sometimes hers when mirrored in my blue and whisper childhood lullabyes while tears stream, overdue. Camouflaged, when face to face my arms reach out in care. Burdened, we have both become when I am with her, there. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (09-05-2003 11:17 AM).] |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
what a love you have for your sister M still saying prayers very nicely done here. bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, This is one of your best, wonderful write. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Bernie, I have to sit it out today and see if anything can be done surgical-wise or if there is nothing that can be done... you are a good friend hugs M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (09-05-2003 11:18 AM).] |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
M~ May everything go well and your sister be healthy and strong very soon... I don't know if I could handle something like this if it were my sister...your strength is something to be envied. Susan |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
A short prayer for you both: Dear Lord plead guide these ladies from above And revel in their wondrous love Of love and laughter over the years Of sadness and sorrows and even fears For even now they stand side by side Waiting for heaven's cleansing tide Grant them peace so that they may feel The life and exisistence that is so real Bring these sisters back together on this earth And show us that there is the miracle of rebirth I pray with all my spirit and heart That these two shall never part For it's rare to see such beauty like their's And in this world they've alot to share Amen. Crystal |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Maureen - the caring comes out in your words... BC |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Maureen . . . a beautiful sentiment indeed and Pandora's box . . . oooh I thought that was mine . . . *smile* xxoo |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Maureen...Such tender words from your heart you share with us. Praying that your sister gets better...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Maureen, being so close to my own sister... I can only imagine what you must be going through. Prayers are being said. ~Hugs to you both, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You understand I know, the burden is eased when it is shared!!! Just be there for her Maur.... and let your heart overflow~ As you do, and it does~ hugs~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Maureen, powerful words and empowering emotions. *HuGS Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I wish to thank all who have responded for their kind words... When no news is "bad news" came today in a phone call from my Mother, letting me know that there is nothing more that can be done for my sister. I will be trying to spend as much time now as I can with her (as much of me as she will or can tolerate ...so if I do not respond much and should vent a bit poetically, instead... know it is not because I am not reading...but that I am an overly emotional person and at times am not able to respond properly. hugs to you all... Maureen |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
May an angel be on your shoulder giving you the strength you need to share this time with her Maureen. Each of us deals with this in our own way, I shall email you, but your words of love here will be the light that shines your way. God bless you all and help you through this. |
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