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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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the field has been plowed, recovering from delivery and sealed with a brown dressing stretching over its emtpy girth for now, the paisley leaves build a shrine around it, watched by the pensive sky looking down, and the blackbirds will pick a while at its afterbirth, until it washes out in coming storms, and another season will layer on those buried before it, as the cover of sky will hold it all in place, though all contingent on the rain to still come down [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (09-06-2003 01:18 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Damn Michele nice metaphors . . . the layers of life . . . as the season comes once again beautiful writing xxoo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Fantastic write Michele! Wonderful style you have... I'm becoming one of your biggest fans! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
just great,,, [This message has been edited by QjQ (09-06-2003 10:53 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, all contingent on the rain hugs to ya |
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