Open Poetry #28 |
When The Dragon Has The Tiger's Tail |
icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Come chase the dragon with me tonight, we'll fly through this dark and rainy Andalusian night fearing no hand, racing in the mind storms of the mildly disenchanted across the open fields where the muddy roads once slanted to the sun; we can be no more or less than completely free. I'll race you to the straits of Gibralter stripping down into the sea and on to Cape Saint Vincent where we'll eat partridge and almond soup, I'll steal horses and wine and soft breasted brown-eyed women for us both. I think perhaps that little fellow with the pipe was right, I could believe, though you and I have run this race before, we are invisible tonight. ©2003 by icebox |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I was getting ready to go to bed and saw this... So now before I sleep I am going to ask that I may join you for an astral trip... Show me the sights you speak of. night... Susan |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
...ya-haaaa, sounds like a pipe-dream to meeeeee. ~K~ |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I don't know exactly what to say.. this is really cool.. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Invisibility about magnificent moors... quite conducive to eventide's intrigue... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox Okay..except for the soft breasted brown eyed woman. Sounds like quite an adventure! |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
this was cool,so visual i could see every word good write |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
The 'mildly disenchanted'--I love that! This is a great vision, I can feel the rush. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds like a plan...James |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
icebox WEll this didn't come out of the freezer. LOL |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
LOL@Sy's reply. I love this..may I come along for the ride? But, I'll skip the soft breasted brown-eyed woman. ~Smiles, Hugs and Sweet Dreams, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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