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Open Poetry #28

if the sun

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2003-09-04 10:05 PM

if the sun
should not rise
tomorrow
I'll still be OK

for I've found great warmth and light
from sitting here
and reading you
and that just might
sustain this life
beyond
all expectations

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2003-09-04 10:56 PM

What beautiful verse. There is such peace in satisfying friendships, with our maker, with ourselves and with others.
TD

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-09-04 11:01 PM

Kacy, how open and pure this verse is..
I really love this...keeping it.
~Hugs~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have the sand in my shoes ~

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

3 posted 2003-09-04 11:13 PM

What a great comment on existence! Does it come in paperback? I could use a read like that. *grin*

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

4 posted 2003-09-04 11:27 PM

Kacy...Simple,Profound and Totally Honest.
Enjoyed very much...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2003-09-05 02:21 PM

I gift this thought to each of you,
for you make my heart beat stronger
each time I visit you in the blue.

thanks for spending a moment here with me

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-09-05 09:26 PM

God, Kacy you sure give me strength when I need it, thank you
xxoo

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