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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-09-03 10:28 PM

Mornings stack like pancakes,
tea bags line up
from here to China and back,
some just run clear and continuous
one neverending brushstroke
and here i go again,
etched back into position,
in a masterpiece some obscure artist is painting me famous in,
all beginning where yesterday left off.......
cappachino , fruitloops, and morning blues.

Then there are those stinging ones,
opening shot of the famiiar decor
of bedcovers, wallpaper and nightstands
with leftover wine stains,
i ache with sadness,
feeling cheated,
like a newborn popping out of the birth canal,
or even more invaded
at times,
a hostage held, then released
shot from a cannonball,
breaking the skin of my destiny
whether or not i wanted to.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (09-03-2003 10:28 PM).]

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-09-03 10:42 PM

Your poetry is like
amazing thoughts written in
a beautiful order..

I love this..

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-09-03 10:42 PM

good penning,
enjoyed,,

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

3 posted 2003-09-03 11:31 PM

Almost like a spirit exclaiming,
"Help, I'm trapped inside this
human body ~~ and my body is
trapped inside the messes of
this world"!

Fabulous write!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2003-09-03 11:36 PM

and here i go again,
etched back into position,
in a masterpiece some obscure artist is painting me famous in,
all beginning where yesterday left off......

Hiya, girlielocks....Liked those lines a lot,
then you went and got all sad on me!!!!

Smile now, Michele~

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

5 posted 2003-09-03 11:39 PM

This is fantastic.The insight and metaphors you use are great.

Crystal

MERCURY
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 190
Ireland

6 posted 2003-09-04 04:51 AM

Wrong timezone........Right emotion. Great poem

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

7 posted 2003-09-04 08:16 PM

Interesting and thought provoking.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-09-05 09:21 PM

Michele . . .
you must find that key, m'dear
*smile*
love the title . . .
beautiful writing, as always
xxoo

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