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On Being G-d (inspired by Amature2)
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On Being G-d (inspired by Amature2) |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes 
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I sit here alone Staring staring staring At the page in front of me It is whitedeviod of color No ink to stain its purity Thoughts not coming I try my best to work Yet no words flow from my pen I gaze longingly at the white Until the focus is gone As I sit in my pain I realize The blank in front of me The creation unfulfilled Is simply G-d in His loving way Teaching me how hard It is to be Him ************************************** Since I have been accused by some on here before, I will finish this by saying that I am not comparing myself to Him. I am but a lowly poet facing the blank page every day. And I truly believe that creating "life" out of nothingness is His way of letting us know that it isn't easy to be him. We are all equal but we’re individually different and able to reach the impossible if we try. [This message has been edited by Ringo (09-04-2003 09:45 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Enjoyed the write. AND? I've never had any problems with your words. (or the one's I've thought were God's, for that matter.)  |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
Ringo, I am humbled to have inspired a writer like you. Isn't it funny how some days the words just flow, you want to post as many as you can before the padlock goes on. Then there are those days when we just end up with Blank Paper. Thanks for sharing. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ringo, I think this is a very wonderful poem with a humble and tender feeling about it. I also have never had any trouble with your words. Thanks for sharing these with us here.  Hugs  Ethel |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Wow...this was amazing... I haven't been coming here very long, but I have really liked all the writes I have read by you. I hope I haven't been construed as one of these you speak of I just know I can relate to this and I hate it when I can't get anything to come out on paper. The one I submitted a few mins. ago shows how much I hate it. I had to force one out of boredommmmmmmmmmmm...ughhhhhhhhh... I loved the way you compared the creator to creating...it must be VERY hard to be Him! This was amazing, and this was when you were having a problem creating? WOW! SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Midnite Sun- Thenk you for the kind words... The flack I got was in response to a posting I did quite sometime ago where I made a comparison of human to G-d. Amature- It's hard to be inspired by an average writer. Thank you for the inspiration. Ethyl- Thank you. And no, it wasn't anyone who responded that gave me grief. Rose- You are a very talented writer, and I enjoy your words very much. It does my poor heart good to hear that you enjoy my writing. Thank you. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Brad, I do believe this is the most beautiful and sincere thing I have read in a very long time . . . and to be inspired is truly a beautiful thing *smile* xxoo |
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