Harvest King, Autumn Queen (Tima's Challenge)

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littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

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New York

0 posted 2003-09-01 09:46 AM

God of Harvest, Autumn Queen
Upon return, I shall greet Thee
Mother slumber, Father dream
God of Harvest, Autumn Queen
Lest I forget, chance to redeem
What will be is.What was will be.
God of Harvest, Autumn Queen
Upon return, I shall greet Thee

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-09-01 09:57 AM

littlewing
You met the challenge very well.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-09-01 10:17 AM

I feel like dancing around a bonfire!

Linda

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

3 posted 2003-09-01 10:33 AM

So pretty...makes me anticipate the season all the more, and I didn't know that was even possible. I love that time of year!!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2003-09-01 10:50 AM

It reads like a chant
That might
Be said,(like a mantra)
Over and over
In fire-light
By Faes or gnomes,
Or sprites.
*
Reminds me of Tolkien..great write
>-)->....ice

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

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British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2003-09-01 12:56 PM

Exactly! Icebox nailed it and I can see the fae whispering it. Ohhhhh, I loved this.

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2003-09-01 02:02 PM

Sue~

Very nicely done!

Susan

timothysangel1973

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since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

7 posted 2003-09-01 02:08 PM

Hey Ladybug! That was great, you met and exceeded the challenge my friend! This was awesome! I am doing Fall to, just haven't had the time yet to work on anything!

Let's get together for a 'seasons' duo!
I bet we could rock the house little sister!

xxoo
Tima

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2003-09-01 03:03 PM

Simply lovely Sue. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
Emily Dickinson

Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

9 posted 2003-09-01 03:17 PM

to everything
a season

always glad to
turn
to your poetry..

nice littlewink

Martie

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California

10 posted 2003-09-01 03:19 PM

littlewing

Autumn..my favorite time of year..this is like a beautiful song.

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

11 posted 2003-09-01 04:56 PM

This indeed did read like a song... very beautiful little one

Maree.

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

12 posted 2003-09-01 05:14 PM

Hmmmmm,
Martie and Maree snatched the words from my mouth....A song

You know the rest....

vandana

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13 posted 2003-09-01 06:22 PM

enjoyed

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

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Ohio

14 posted 2003-09-01 07:09 PM

very timely
the trees are ripe with apples right down the road from me,
lovely and lyrical

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

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highways, & byways, for now

15 posted 2003-09-01 11:38 PM

littlewing - autumn is coming and you're bringing it in with this write...

BC

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

16 posted 2003-09-01 11:44 PM

I feel like joining with all who wish to be my sister around a bonfire and chant this lovely write.

You my lady havve met this challenge and exceeded it

Crystal

Essorant
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since 2002-08-10

Posts 4769
Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada

17 posted 2003-09-02 12:53 PM

Littlewing,

I like this. It's A charming salute unto the fairest of the Seasons; and couched fair in the triolet form.
A pleasure to read.

Essorant

[This message has been edited by Essorant (09-02-2003 12:54 AM).]

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

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Florida, USA

18 posted 2003-09-02 04:22 AM

Sue, this is an awesome write....just beautiful...

Hugs

Ethel

Kaoru

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where the wild flowers grow

19 posted 2003-09-02 04:37 AM

Wow, you met the challenge wonderfully..

I'm amazed.. great work.

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

20 posted 2003-09-02 05:30 AM

Thank you so much SY - good to see you reading!

Linda . . . grab my hand please
thank you

Shara, me too, I despise winter but Fall
just beauty . . . thank you

ice - thank you so much, I was hoping to come off sounding like I knew what I was talking about . . .

Sharon, thank you so much *smile*
join the dance then

Thank you Susan, coming from you that means a lot to me

Tima, you got it, buzz me and we shall get our fingers flexing, thanky you for this challenge and glad you liked
Ladybug

Thank you Chris, I have missed you or is it I havent been here *smile*

Het Reb, yes to every season exactly
nice and thank you
Littlewink

Martie, yesss Autumn is just lovely here . . . thank you so much

Maree . . . from you, this means the world to me thank you
little one

Ed, yes . . yes, I do know . . .
and thank you . . . it is your song too

Thank you so much Vandana!

Thank you Michele . . . the trees here are nearly set for the season

Bill, that was such a beautiful thing to say to me - always so very sweet to me  thank you

Crystal - you are a sister to all
please do and thank you so much

Essorant - my my what a lovely reply
thank you so much and ssshh it isnt a perfect triolet, trying to pass it off as one but glad you noticed
*smile*

Thank you Ethel, beautiful from you means a lot to me

Thank you Meg, amazed?  your pen flows with liquid grace m'lady . . . thank you

Thank you guys
xxoo

Lady Godiva
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since 2003-09-03

Posts 35
at the bottom of your glass

21 posted 2003-09-03 08:40 PM

littlewing, beautiful presentation and well met...I wish I had more words to justify how I enjoyed reading this but I must admit I'm not that much of a commenting person, I feel as my words do no justice....

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

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Somewhere... out there...

22 posted 2003-09-03 08:46 PM

Oh...Sue...I LOVE this!

It begs to be chanted over and over again.
Just beautiful, lady.

Hugs, you,
~Vicky
"Deep inside this armor, the warrior is a child."
~Twila Paris

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

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the ass-end of space

23 posted 2003-09-03 09:00 PM

Very nice Sue ..rhythmic

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise

24 posted 2003-09-03 09:11 PM

I can't wait to greet them and with open arms. Because they bring with them cooler weather!

Wonderful poem Sue ... hugs, Marti

Nature always tends to act in the simplest way.
~ Bernoulli ~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

25 posted 2003-09-04 09:38 PM

(smiles) Oh Sue, I just love this, sweet friend, if you sow in the spring, you will reap in the autumn they say and there is so much beauty to behold in autumn's sacred womb! (kiss on cheek) I just love the form, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light awlays shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

26 posted 2003-09-05 09:31 PM

Lady . . . your words say enough , just you being here says enough to me thank you

Thank you Vicky - Glad you liked, are you chanting? *smile*

Thank you Raph . . . glad that you liked

Marti - thank you so much - yes . . .
one of my favorite seasons

Thank you Noah, always bringing a smile to my face

Thanks guys
xxoo

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