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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-09-04 09:12 PM

I won't ever let go
of the smoke
I exhaled,
it slithers
from my lips
all too clear.
i
breathe out
again
and wonder
is
this smoke
just
a strain
of
loss..?
Closing my
eyes
to slip away..
where
will I be
in the next
one thousand
todays..

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

1 posted 2003-09-04 11:16 PM

When I can explain depths of the pain of loss, I will. Until then, I'll just keep reading you. You're amazing.

Kielo

I'll never forget you.... I know that much, despite my foolishness.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-09-04 11:27 PM

nicely written and expressed deeply,,,,

nice pic,,

MERCURY
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 190
Ireland

3 posted 2003-09-05 04:57 AM

the smoke you exhale is not a strain of loss but it is the fire within you burning.Great stuffffffffff.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2003-09-05 09:27 AM

"next one thousand days"

Loved that line.

Susan

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2003-09-05 11:47 AM

Something beautiful lies here.

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

6 posted 2003-09-05 11:49 AM

This smoke shows your beauty and show the courage you have toi sustain it all.

Crystal

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-09-05 11:55 AM

"in the next
one thousand
todays.."

love that line!

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

8 posted 2003-09-06 10:41 AM

Somewhere much better than this limbo, I hope. Got me thinking about how one day, we wont remember the minute we open our eyes, and he will slip our minds.

have i told ya yet i love ya new pic? the dark suits you, wish i cud carry something like that off, but i cant. not with me scrambled egg hair.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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