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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-09-04 02:14 AM

Misty clouds fall
in front of my eye...
they whisper me
heaven's secrets..

Empty shuttle
carresses adventure,
a said
tour
of the universe.

Some music
I just won't
throw away..

Some tones
recycle my tears

space echo

I bind
cotton candy
nebula..

I saw the morning
before you did..

You've never
touched heaven..along
my side..

stitching
time..
I can try
again..

the intergalactic
birds
chirp and feed
on the stars..

as if
space
echos
were only

grass...

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2003-09-04 02:18 AM

Ah.........I LOVE this one!!! Of course, I am a space addict, whether it be astronomy, or Star Trek......and this poem fits like a glove for me!!!! Great ideas here, wonderful images, and a nice way to start my journey through the time and space of the day!!! ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

MERCURY
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 190
Ireland

2 posted 2003-09-04 04:37 AM

Fantastic imagery, this poem is stronger than krptonite.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

3 posted 2003-09-04 05:32 AM

the visions expressed show terrific penning,,,

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2003-09-04 06:30 AM

I bind
cotton candy
nebula

very cool lines in a very gifted poem
i can certainly relate

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2003-09-04 08:19 AM

lovely words, visuals, concept...very much enjoyed! smiles and hugs sent your way

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2003-09-04 09:33 AM

Meg~

I don't know where you come up with the stuff you do but it is amazing! I really loved this...

Susan

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2003-09-04 09:37 AM

Kaoru
A delight to read.

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

8 posted 2003-09-04 10:20 AM

Awfully nice...A very good read.

~wranx

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

9 posted 2003-09-04 10:27 AM

very descriptive with great imagination

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

10 posted 2003-09-05 07:56 PM

Meg,

you write with such . . . grace

Some music
I just won't
throw away..

Some tones
recycle my tears

space echo

perfect . . . yes yes . . .
I love your new picture!
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (09-05-2003 07:58 PM).]

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

11 posted 2003-09-06 10:37 AM

I saw the morning
before you did..

You've never
touched heaven..along
my side..

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