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Chapter 6
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Chapter 6 |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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Christmas I felt like you had To work me Into your busy Schedule By this time I knew And it hurt But I still hoped And didn’t even know What I hoped for But that day was One of my favorites I remember what you wore And how hard it was To get you to take it off And how I made you late For what I still don’t Want to know I just want to remember your smell that you couldn't say no And what I saw in your eyes |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"And didn’t even know What I hoped for But that day was One of my favorites" Favorite days.. I miss those. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Full of such longing,sadness, and hope.A sense of an unsettling that you don't want to see.Always ready for more. Crystal |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Susan . . . I do believe I know that look This is awesome, Lady xxoo |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Meg~So do I...  Crystal~You hit it..unsettling...perfect description.  Sue~That look should have told her it would have been alright to come clean with her feelings... Susan |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I am erally liking this series. I would say well done but any piece with your name attached is so |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you Dan! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
the series seems to be a bit cathartic..and revealing of the truths you knew even then... nicely done Susan.. quite nice indeed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I've read them all up to this point... I believe it's healthy to 'get it all out'.. So very well done Susan.. and love your pic! ~Hugs~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
sometimes we take whatever we can get... great write.... Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hmmmm...well at least you got a Christmas... *sorry, very moody today~ M |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Ron~Yes assuming it's non-fiction!  Enchantress~Thank you on both counts! KristieSue~And settling is no fun! Thanks for reading. Susan |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
M~ Yes you are right she got a Christmas and cherishes that memory. I am sorry about the "moody today" I know that well... Susan |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
how upsetting one can be to our lives, if we allow them to be... I'm sorry, but I was here to...in your every word, and it will not happen again...I won't allow it...ever! God bless you Lady with many smiles of awareness....into the light of truth and virtue from a love that deserves you. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
AWESOME |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Well at least you got the present for Christmas even if you couldn't have the future. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Lee~Thank you I am glad you can relate. Dan~LOL you are bad! Kethry~Who said it was over? The future isn't here yet.. Susan |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
I remember what you wore And how hard it was To get you to take it off And how I made you late For what I still don’t Want to know ~ My favorite part of this well written 6th installment - especially the "For what..." segment. Enjoyed! Thanks for sharing, Susan. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you Mike! That was my favorite part as well!  Susan |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
Something tells me I need to go back and read the first ones. Well done. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
from chapter to chapter your releasing your experiences and soon you will be free,,, |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
These are so addictive. and each i can identify with. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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