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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2003-09-04 02:44 PM

Somnambulism
Drifts my eye opened day
Unwakened it would seem
By the routine

Rise
Clean skin and hair
Ride paved pathways
Wishing to be
Anywhere

Tell me
Do your dreams need me?

Mine seem to scream you
In colors that delight
An ideal of Gaelic simplicity
Coalesced around
Centuries of knowing
Isolation seems to leave one
If not empty
Then at least
Alone

One foot first
But ‘ware the toes
Stubbed too often there comes
A bruised cut of woes

This night
Though filled with sun
Leaves me walking again

Tell me how
Did we come undone?

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-09-04 02:48 PM

To the first question...
someone is going to answer Yes.

Very good, Captain. You paint
the lonesome but willing very well.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2003-09-04 02:49 PM

pssst...

how appropriate I would read this just as I wake.

and I was thinking before I went to bed, too, thinking that I spend half of my life, screaming to me, "I need order--a ROUTINE."

Then when I get it?

I whine, "How did I get into this RUT?"

smile...

always have me thinking you do...

enjoyed.

But I always do.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2003-09-04 03:18 PM

Oh god, what Karen said!! That is where I am right now!

*sigh*

Ron...so beautiful....

Susan

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2003-09-04 03:39 PM

Tell me
Do your dreams need me?

I think I've asked this very question when struggling against leaving my dreams... hoping the answer is... yes. *S*

And is anyone ever able to point to the exact moment the unraveling began? *S*

I like this very much, Cap'n! *S*

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

5 posted 2003-09-04 04:10 PM

"Tell me
Do your dreams need me?

Mine seem to scream you..."

I know this feeling so well, and that other true feeling you describe, of wondering how in the world things became what they became.

Another hit, another excellent poet. Either I'm charmed or this place is loaded!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2003-09-04 09:28 PM

my dreams
feel a heartbeat
whispering

where are you?

I lie awake at night
wondering

is this
just a dream?

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2003-09-04 09:34 PM

Damn...just, damn!

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have the sand in my shoes ~

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2003-09-04 09:58 PM

Hi Ron...emotive, real...as always you write from the heart and make the reader feel with you.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2003-09-05 06:06 PM

Jesus, Ron, you write beautifully . . .
and Kacy is right . . .
*smile*
xxoo

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