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The Haunting of Blue
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The Haunting of Blue |
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Gina Culliney Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 170 |
So you want my blues to sparkle and to shine. You want them to reflect happiness and to magically come alive. My piercing blues unnerve you. Yes, you know, I know it is true. The uncanny way of stripping you down naked and seeing through to your very soul to. Some call me unnerving, hard, Jaded, or bitter. Some just souless, unnatural, freakish, as they turn away and shiver. But if you are man enough to stand up under this fierce challenge and can hold up under these piercing cold blues, then maybe baby, I'll take a chance on you. [This message has been edited by Gina Culliney (08-27-2003 06:18 PM).] |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Nice write Gina, I knew what you meant Jason [This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (08-28-2003 04:59 PM).] |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Very soulful. Heartfelt and beautiful. I loved it very much. I felt like it was very gritty and stripped of any kind of sarcasm and just in your face. Again, I loved it emmensly. Member, yv |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Well I cna say that your emotions are strong and definetly in perspective. Crystal |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gina Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
nice. one question. "My piercing blues unnerve you. Yes, you know, I know it is true. The uncanny way of stripping you down naked and seeing through to your very soul to" to what? or did you mean "too"? |
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Gina Culliney Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 170 |
thank you all for your honesty, much appreciated. |
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