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Today, I long for touch
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Today, I long for touch |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Today longs for touch infinite as skin upon bone kissing inches of sparks beneath contours that feel for blood that screams to be warmed fingers to entwine prints upon the marks left by he who let go Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
left by he who let go... you know... nah... never mind.. lol.. I wish for you the feel of touch..and the warmth of knowing you are loved.. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Thanks ron.  Your replies always mean much to me.  Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
you're welcome you are far too young and far too pretty to pine too long for someone who did not appreciate what he had..... your poem prompted this... off the top of head.. perhaps my own version of your sad.. I would be touched Have fingers of warm String along my spine Exciting thoughts That maybe Maybe You’ll share How long it seems Since the caress Of a hug Or brushed cheek Told me You care Snuggle me tight Or drape a loose arm That I might know There was more than This Alone… I would be touched But don’t know how Teach me the language Of Braille But let me start now By reading your Lips [This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (09-04-2003 02:03 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, my, Dear Gem Drops! You are v-e-r-y hungry! I suggest you eat some strawberry shortcake--it might make you feel so much better--and it won't hurt your feelings. It may land on your hips but you can work it off better than you can work off a man that's done you wrong! Sending you lots of love--and some strawberry shortcake! I'm on my way! I should be in England in a few minutes. Look for the blue streak in the sky! LL |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Today longs for touch" Yes it does... Enjoyed. Susan |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Gem, this seems to stray from your normal ways of writing.. or not.. I'm not sure, but the way you messaged this is different.. It's still extremely good, I'm always drawn into the words you use.. the descriptions.. Love the new picture, by the way. <3 |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Today longs for touch infinite as skin upon bone kissing inches of sparks beneath contours that feel for blood that screams to be warmed fingers to entwine prints Gemma, Gemma, Gemma....it looks like you've inspired more that one of us. LOL I sure am having a bunch of thoughts of my Gary goiung through my mind.....of course, there'll probably be a poem brewing soon. I don't think I've wrote a poem lately just about his touch. But, what the heck...I'll write another one. I've got a lot of memories mixed in with fantasies that I can write about. ahahahaha!! I really liked this one, my little friend. Can you tell? LOL  Hugs to you, my friend  Ethel (pssstttt!!! there will be touch again...just as good, if not better!!) |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey Gemma, I forgot to mention that I really like the new picture. Ya know what? One of these days he is going to realize what he lost......the beauty of you is not only inside, but outside as well. Hugs, little lady Ethel |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Gem, is that your scrambled egg hair? I love the feeling in this poem. Both of memory, and of getting on with your life. Mike |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Gemma~ Gorgeous new pic~ You pen the touch and the loss of such so poignantly~ I wish you *hugs* to fill your nights~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Lady Godiva Junior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 35at the bottom of your glass |
I feel the strength in this and the ache...hrm...Earth Angel has a point or perhaps Godiva chocolates  ohh goes to your hips well enough but ohhhh its just worth every bite! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Well theres plenty more where he came from...but, I know, we yearn for the ones we grow familiar with...but when they decide to go what else can we do but miss the good parts and look for another...James |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Do I tell you all how much i love you? no? I LOVE YOU! so supportive, and always making me feel like i'm not having a breakdown afterall! ron? you just proved to me, why i treasure your replies. you nailed it. exactly the feelings i hold. Thankyou.   love yoooooou guys.Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Goodness that was a beautiful display you guys . . . xxoo |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
oh gumdrop..I loved this!!! library..um yeah. and yes, your picture is awsome..I need a new one..that doesn't involve me holding my brath or have one eye half shut and the other open. lol..I'm not photogenic like you insanity is not a crime |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Gemma, I know this desire ever so strongly, sweet friend, I long to hold ones hand for the first time, it must be magical is all I can assume! (kiss on cheek) I just love your beautiful new picture, sweet friend, love that bright smile, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Thankyou again. You little sweethearts. and liz? I am not photogenic! I had to find another one of me smiling, with my scrambbled egg hair, well laughing, so you don't worry that i'm crying all the time. believe me, i look like a hamster on most photos. and not a nice one. and, i loooove that photo of you, its so innocent and natural, just doing yer hair, i like it, so dont get rid!!!! Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
hugs gem , I felt the ache !!! I hope he realises it was his mistake Hope |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
this is just beautiful..hugs and you are photogenic shaddup already |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey, i wrote that other "touch" one in the wee hours this morning. I told you I would. LOL it's here...... /pip/Forum81/HTML/002389.html Love and hugs Ethel Mae |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
'prints upon the marks left by he who let go' ow stings very hands-on  |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This hurts, but you are strong and will survive.:squueze: Crystal |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Oh yes...I know this longing for touch. I feel it too... Hugs to you, ~Vicky If you judge people, you have no time to love them. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
.... wanting .... (I am left) *S |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
.... and left room for a deeper love to trace the chambers of a beautiful heart. (softly I listen, listen to its beat ...) o *S x |
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