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The last day we spent in love
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The last day we spent in love |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Remember dusk in the palm of our hands knowing clenched fist could not keep it Watercolour pinks tracing the grey eyes moved like water over the remains of a day spent in love Savoured til chills inched over goosebumps retreating arm in arm Each step we walked away from it I never knew was a step away from you Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Gemma, this is so beautifully heartaching, sweet friend, it hurts to look over your shoulder and see the space between, I know! (sad sigh) I send healing angel hugs your way, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I need more! for my library. you do know that half of everything in there is your's don't ya? lol..you do now  insanity is not a crime |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...I know that they don't always tell you its the last day...James |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Savoured til chills inched over goosebumps retreating arm in arm these lines were terrific, very nice write n read,, |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Thankyou  It's a day i treasure, and relive in my head often, despite how much it hurts to know, i no longer have more to look forward to with him. but, i'll live  Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
..sigh |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Each step we walked away from it I never knew was a step away from you reminds me of a long time ago..the last day for me was so perfect..but in the end too perfect to last |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
exactly! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, how could any man do that to our precious gem?!? Some day he will realize all that he let go...and it will be too late for him! You will have moved on to bigger and better things! This was painfully, yet beautifully emotive. Sending you a great big loving hug, LL |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
hugs greatly accepted. thankyou for your kind replies. they mean a lot. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Sad....but not entirely so. You've found beauty in the memory, and that helps. Thank you for sharing it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Watercolour pinks tracing the grey eyes moved like water over the remains of a day spent in love" This reminds me that even one day is so worth the memory... Thank you! Susan |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
*sigh* |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
nice... Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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