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HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2003-08-05 06:43 AM

Can The Heart Be Heard

Thoughts I need to write
I gave my pen the task
My heart needs to flow
Questions I need to ask

Often the need to clarify
Inviting the written word
When I write you letters
Can the heart be heard

To whom I have trusted
This my heart given link
Words to communicate
Do they make you think

In words written for you
Thoughts come to light
Did you read my heart
I was hoping you might

Hope©2003

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2003-08-05 06:50 AM

Did you read my heart
I was hoping you might

i always hope my heart does carry across the miles on these cyberpages, but sometimes it is so hard to know for sure, until the breakthrough to the physical world

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-08-05 08:58 AM

I think if you have a man that appreciates you he will definately hear your heart and vice versa...James

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

3 posted 2003-08-05 06:56 PM

Hope, I hear ya.

I once wrote to a love of mine, we lived far apart for some time, and I do believe the written word is ~felt~ just as much as the spoken.

But, yeah, you wonder, if your message is getting through, if theyre taking every word in, like you take in theirs, re read over and over.

I'm keeping this.

much love Hope,
Gem
xxxx

Instant karma's gonna get you.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-08-05 07:01 PM

In words written for you
Thoughts come to light
Did you read my heart
I was hoping you might

Goodnes, Hope, this is so beautiful. I love your poetry. I don't know how I missed this one. It is absolutely beautiful.

Hugs

Ethel

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2003-08-05 07:11 PM

I hope he does for you..but my heart was never heard...gave up finally.

hugss
M

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-09-20 12:50 PM

for another rounds.
Hugs, sweet lady

Ethel

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

7 posted 2003-09-20 12:53 PM

what a wonderful write!! thanks for sharing this

Ciao Bella

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

8 posted 2003-09-20 12:53 PM

Loud and clear! Sensitive and splendidly written.

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