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Open Poetry #28

I Could

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-09-19 09:54 AM

I Could

I could
touch you
in words
but it wouldn’t
be near enough
you need to be
pulled close
where breath warms
and air tingles
in things said
and unsaid
where lashes
curl to
no distance
unable to
find when
you started
and I ended

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

alisa
Member

since 2003-08-20

Posts 70
Florida

1 posted 2003-09-19 10:23 AM

very very nice....

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

2 posted 2003-09-19 10:25 AM

ain't it the truth!!!
Smiles,
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

3 posted 2003-09-19 10:30 AM

I could, too

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2003-09-19 10:38 AM

I tried to copy my favorite part... and had the entire poem copied... This one is going into my library... it's already in my heart.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2003-09-19 11:19 AM

beautiful..

Susan

PouringJewels
Member

since 2003-09-18

Posts 158
Maryland

6 posted 2003-09-20 08:55 AM

why do we always have to wonder for me it has always gone bad good way to express how many of us feel

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

7 posted 2003-09-20 12:52 PM

A nice image, the joining of thoughts...and things...

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