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SharaRose
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0 posted 2003-09-04 10:41 PM


It's Better 'n Bein' Dead




File this away
under
I don't understand
You know
those emotions
the ones that are
so bland.
Fun in the sun
you can hear
in the back of your head
but staying home
is
what you do
instead.
Listen to tv
or go to bed
Watch the
Hillbillies
and
Uncle Jed?
Or watch
Emeril,
He's the one
that's well fed.
hehehe...
Maybe I'm bored
yeppers sure it's true
but it beats bein' dead!
It's true
Yep, that's what I said
I think it's better
better 'n bein' dead!




hehehe....can you tell i'm sooooooooooooooo boredddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd!?

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

© Copyright 2003 Shara - All Rights Reserved
bslicker
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1 posted 2003-09-05 12:31 PM


ah i think it's cute
if being bored you write like this cann't wait for the ones to come.

bernie


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (09-05-2003 12:32 AM).]

SharaRose
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2 posted 2003-09-05 12:49 PM


Jus' feelin' Thanks bslicker..glad u liked...

Shara @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Kahlil
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3 posted 2003-09-05 01:01 AM


Just keep writing, then you can't get bored!  And we won't be either if you post them!  ~K~
QjQ
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4 posted 2003-09-05 01:05 AM


how true,, lady poetress

            


garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-09-05 02:25 AM


SharRose, I love this cute poem. And I really
do have fun being goofy sometimes. LOL
Hey, I noticed that you found the smilies. LOL
Don't you just love this one??
I like this evil laugh, too...
Hugs to you  
Ethel

MERCURY
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6 posted 2003-09-05 05:04 AM


A fun wee poem, You really must have been chairman of the bored.
Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-09-05 09:04 AM


You took boring lemons and turned them into lemonade with this entertaining write!


EA

SharaRose
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8 posted 2003-09-05 10:52 AM


Hi...I appreciate all of you...

Kahlil-Thank you that was sweet.

QJQ-- Thanks Q. I appreciate the comment.

garysgirl--I'm glad you liked. I love the smileys, and the goofy faces, and the little devil grin makes me think of Halloween right around the corner...

MERCURY--hehehe With gavel in hand I second that motion.

Earth Angel--Thanks. That was sweet of you to say.

to all,
SharaRose @-->--


Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

angelblueyes
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9 posted 2003-09-05 12:32 PM


You may be bored, but it shows the palyfulness in your heart, the spunk in your spirit, and the laughter in your soul.Never lose those my friend.
Crystal

Bill Charles
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10 posted 2003-09-05 03:55 PM


SharaRose - yes, I can sure tell. Nice write about boredom...

BC

Pilgrimage
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11 posted 2003-09-05 04:42 PM


I love the voice in this one. Cheerful little poem. I like it.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

SharaRose
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12 posted 2003-09-06 10:29 AM


Hi...thanks to all of you...

Angelblueyes--Thank you. That's the nicest things anyone has said to me in a while. Bless you for being so kind with your words to me.

BC--Thanks...I appreciate your words.

Pilgrimage--I am glad you liked. Also it brought some cheer to you...thanks for recognizing that in my write.


SharaRose @-->--



Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-06-2003 10:30 AM).]

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