Open Poetry #28 |
Sweethearts Rictameter |
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
~*~ Sweethearts Love each other With hearts ever entwined For forever and for always Two hearts molded together into one Bonded, never to be broken Just as our hearts are, for You and I are Sweethearts ~*~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-03-2003 07:37 PM).] |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Awwww...I just love these. They are always so full of love, and heart, and gentle kindness. I don't know what rictameter is, but I need to get to reading so I can find out all this meter stuff. ?? Don't know what it is, but I can learn.. Thanks for always sharing these sweet ones!! Shara @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Smiling... Ethel...your poetry is always so positive and lovely. Thank you for being a shining light in these blue walls. "My friends are my estate." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Indeed, you and your Honey Love are Sweethearts!--to each other and to us! Lovely rictameter, Dear Ethel Mae! Huggums, Linda Lou |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi SharaRose, thanks for your sweet reply. Here is a link that someone on here gave us. It's tells of a lot of different forms of poetry. This link and the one in our own Poetry Workshop in Discussions on here will help. This is the link to the first one...... http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/types.html I'll go get the link to the Poetry Workshop.... /pip/Forum22/HTML/000759.html [This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-03-2003 02:03 AM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vicky, thank you so much for your wonderful reply. You are so sweet, my friend. Hugs Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Linda Lou, thank you. Gary and I really do appreciate you, sweet Lady. Hugs Ethel |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
You deserve this sweetheart for someone as special and angelic as you will have a life full of happiness,true passion, and comforting souls.I love the beauty and romance is breathtaking here. Crystal |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Vandana. . . Crystal, that is so sweet to say. Thank you. . . I appreciate both of you. Hugs to ya'll, Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) And each day, we watch as you sweethearts hearts continue to get bigger with love and only glow brighter each and every day with smiles! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, your poetry is a joy to behold, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is precious. The structure seems to be made for this poem, so that means you wrote it well. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Ethel you have mastered these so well. One day I'm going to have a go at one. In the meantime...keep on writing! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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