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0 posted 2003-09-02 09:52 PM




~*~
Sweethearts
Love each other
With hearts  ever  entwined
For  forever  and  for   always
Two  hearts  molded  together into  one
Bonded,  never  to  be   broken
Just as our hearts are, for
You  and  I are
Sweethearts
~*~






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1 posted 2003-09-02 11:39 PM


Awwww...I just love these. They are always so full of love, and heart, and gentle kindness. I don't know what rictameter is, but I need to get to reading so I can find out all this meter stuff. ?? Don't know what it is, but I can learn.. Thanks for always sharing these sweet ones!!

Shara @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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2 posted 2003-09-02 11:48 PM



Smiling...

Ethel...your poetry is always so positive
and lovely.  

Thank you for being a shining light
in these blue walls.

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

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3 posted 2003-09-03 01:11 AM


Indeed, you and your Honey Love are Sweethearts!--to each other and to us!

Lovely rictameter, Dear Ethel Mae!

Huggums,
Linda Lou

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4 posted 2003-09-03 01:34 AM


Hi SharaRose, thanks for your sweet reply.
Here is a link that someone on here gave us.
It's tells of a lot of different forms of poetry.
This link and the one in our own Poetry Workshop
in Discussions on here will help.

This is the link to the first one......
http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/types.html

I'll go get the link to the Poetry Workshop....

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5 posted 2003-09-03 02:05 AM


Vicky, thank you so much for your wonderful
reply. You are so sweet, my friend.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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6 posted 2003-09-03 02:07 AM


Linda Lou, thank you. Gary and I
really do appreciate you, sweet Lady.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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7 posted 2003-09-03 07:32 PM


nice
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8 posted 2003-09-03 07:35 PM


You deserve this sweetheart for someone as special and angelic as you will have a life full of happiness,true passion, and comforting souls.I love the beauty and romance is breathtaking here.
Crystal

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Thank you, Vandana.  
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Crystal, that is so sweet to say. Thank you.  
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I appreciate both of you.
Hugs  to ya'll,  
Ethel

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10 posted 2003-09-05 11:18 PM




(smiles) And each day, we watch as you sweethearts hearts continue to get bigger with love and only glow brighter each and every day with smiles! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, your poetry is a joy to behold, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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11 posted 2003-09-05 11:23 PM


This is precious. The structure seems to be made for this poem, so that means you wrote it well.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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12 posted 2003-09-05 11:28 PM


Ah Ethel you have mastered these so well.
One day I'm going to have a go at one.
In the meantime...keep on writing!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

      ~ Summer can't be over...
   I still have sand in my shoes ~

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