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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-09-02 07:55 PM


“WORDS CONCEALED”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
When whispers soft I hear are
of you, gifts mentioned
are given of an
angel, ones of romance, passion,
and a loving muse, but
words concealed in this
pen perhaps is
of pains throbbing, for of
realness are the words written in…
~~~~

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-09-02 07:57 PM


You are a wise man who cares to look beyond the obvious...


EA

QjQ
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2 posted 2003-09-02 08:10 PM


very good thoughts,,
enjoyed the read,,,

         


inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2003-09-02 10:23 PM


words concealed in this
pen perhaps is
of pains throbbing, for of
realness are the words written in…
~~~~

yes i know that too....certain things i dare not acknowledge, as if they aren't there unless i say them out loud.......like fooling myself in a way
good thoughts, a bit different today

SharaRose
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4 posted 2003-09-02 11:24 PM


Awwww, and how is it this man that writes like this, with such heart, and tenderness would even have this concern. Sad one,,,broke my heart to read. A pen. :'(

Shara @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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5 posted 2003-09-03 01:03 AM


Bill...Enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing
Perhaps a little joy will flow from your pin soon...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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6 posted 2003-09-05 11:29 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Bill, this is so very heartbreaking, sweet friend, I was deceived by the same shenanagan as you know, but fear not as some are truly soft on both the inside and outside! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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