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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2003-09-07 10:03 PM

The dream was over
at the start of day--
no gentle backlight
uplights easing
the grays away
to pinks
against the cobalt blue
worrying the sky--
realize--realize
realize-my-child--
we are hypnotized.
talking stories
to the fire
as the split tongue hisses
another
new
day
squalling our goodbyes.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-09-07 10:06 PM

expressed thoughts very well,,,

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2003-09-07 10:24 PM

Oh my, Karen...

This hits hard tonight...I can't even explain...

Hugs you... ...love you, lady.

If you judge people, you have no time to love them.
--Mother Teresa
[This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-07-2003 10:26 PM).]

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

3 posted 2003-09-07 11:03 PM

You intrigue me everytime.

Crystal

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

4 posted 2003-09-07 11:12 PM

and every sunrise
washes out the vampyre

blood
the best of inks

I'd rather take
the stake
sometimes

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-09-08 06:51 PM

like a night around the fire and awakening in the mud . . .

realize--realize
realize-my-child--
we are hypnotized.

beautiful lines K
xxoo

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2003-09-09 11:01 AM

"The dream was over
at the start of day--
no gentle backlight
uplights easing
the grays away"

My favorite lines..

"realize"

yes...split tongue hiss...hmmm

Okay, so it was hard picking favorite lines..

Susan

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-09-09 11:09 AM

The dream was over
at the start of day--
no gentle backlight
uplights easing
the grays away
to pinks
against the cobalt blue
worrying the sky--

SereneOne, you are amazing. I love
your thoughts.

Hugs

Ethel

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

8 posted 2003-09-09 12:47 PM

(smiling)...

So the heat
slap beat dreams
of stories told
makes one know both
the young and old

flicker jest the hiss of fire
let the moon alone retire
our eyes must watch
the disbelief
the wondering tongue
of the souls heart thief

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

9 posted 2003-09-09 05:54 PM

talking stories
to the fire
as the split tongue hisses
another
new
day
squalling our goodbyes.

Jeez Karen... what a magnificent image. Absolutely love it.

&

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

10 posted 2003-09-09 06:00 PM

a keeper for the mini brat's library

...

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

11 posted 2003-09-09 06:00 PM

I forgot to press the button

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

12 posted 2003-09-09 09:20 PM

You know, dear Karen, you always take me to where I've never been. And always you give me reason to admire you even more...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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