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KristieSue
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0 posted 2003-09-01 08:02 PM



Is it easy for you to forget
that first day we met and
you held me in your arms
the look in my eyes

Doesn't it bother you when
you hear the pain in my voice
When you see the tears I cry
When the pain just doesn't stop

Do you forget your own pain
when you gave birth to me
brought me into this world
just to pretend I don't exist

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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1 posted 2003-09-01 08:03 PM


I feel it. really, and this was great

insanity is not a crime

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2 posted 2003-09-01 08:06 PM


wonderful and passionate write.

~*Alnilam*~
"The worst tragedy for a poet is to be admired through being misunderstood."

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3 posted 2003-09-01 08:09 PM


good enjoyed

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


KristieSue
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4 posted 2003-09-02 12:17 PM


Thank you...glad you enjoyed.

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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5 posted 2003-09-02 12:47 PM


I feel the deep emotions here.You do exsist and if this person can't see you for the true beauty you are then they need to reevaluate the opness of their heart and soul.Keep pushing forward to that shining light my friend
Crystal

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6 posted 2003-09-02 12:05 PM


oohh Kristie - I do know this pain well
nice bleed
xxoo

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7 posted 2003-09-02 12:26 PM


Well you most certainly do exist, Dear Kristie Sue! I could hardly tear my eyes away from your eyes. They are mesmerizing and there is a whole lot going on behind them!

I'm sorry for the pain and sorrow that you are experiencing (if you are the subject of this write). You have a gentle soul and deserve love and respect.

Loving hugs, Dear One,
EA

KristieSue
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8 posted 2003-09-02 12:40 PM


Thanks Sue...

Ethel~you make me cry...thanks

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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